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Have to admit...these chapters bore me to tears, at least with the Princess I had the thrill of her trying to outwit the den of vipers she was tossed into and the shock of the twisted situation she is in. This is...just some guy trying to plot and plan around another faction in an attempt to conquer and...well yeah it important it not that interesting to read of a guy just planning things.
I'm sure this will add up to something interesting down the road, but for now it just...a chapter of 'Okay we get it guy you are smarter than the smarties and you so gooooood at adjusting your plans when the old plan is fucked up by powers out of your control. Can we DO something?!'
Just my opinion on this chapter, still love the story in general and I read every new chapter as soon as I can.
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Well the next chapter is about said princess and this chapter exists because of something that happens later in the plot line. Totaled for this entire arch (war, siege, aftermath) there are two more Halim chapters that are action based, a partial one (maybe) dealing with the aftermath and the rest is other characters fighting or wrapping up their own story lines.
If this bores you I can say that after this "book" ends, the next one revolves around Verik and his warband quite heavily, namely the adventures they go on and his immediate enemies. Daily life will still be there but right now you are in the arch that is setting up all the various characters for their futures and this chapter is setting up Halim for his before they "fade to background."
Again, this chapter exists because when we near the end of the book and prepare to jump over to the next I do not want there to be confusion as to how and why things happened the way they did, nor about what in the past caused someone to make a future decision.
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That's fair and yeah I get your reasoning to have this, just sharing my opinion on the chap is all. Every story has these set up chapters at some point and I'm sure others enjoy it.
Still again thanks for the heads up.
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And I value the input because I get so little of it, but I also try to avoid boring my readers if I can help it. This though was quite necessary but it will probably take some time for it to become apparent.
and the leadership they find is a warlord and that will be Halim eventual doom brought on by his own hand ironic
So may pieces on the board here, all causing chaos
Which kingdom is Halim invading?
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#35 on the map.