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Very cute! It’ll be interesting to see where this goes from here.
Aww poor kid, I hope this little bit works out okay for her and Altayih
wonder if Verik told the fowls about the star wars or the lord of the rings
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No.
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verik not a fan i guess
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what your patreon?
Very well done. Certainly unexpected development and things are starting to gain a bit of steam on the Homefront
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That’s something else I wanted to add. I think it’s really cool that you had Varick tell them what I can only imagine are either original stories or stories taken from the folklore of a culture that I’m not completely aware of or familiar with.
I know a lot of other authors would’ve just gone the easy route of having him retail Star Wars or Lord of the Rings or Avengers or some other movie that others are familiar with.
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Thank you, and the story is based on a Norse edda, albeit watered down heavily; the original was far more colorful and lengthy. I have found that the ancient eddas have far better morals and ethics to them than the trash written today, they did not sugar coat just how WRONG things could go no matter the intentions.
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Why do I have the sinking feeling this line is going to be very, very relevant to the actual story?
Well this just happened, I can't decide whether I should laugh, smile, or sigh at this new situation
I've read all the story and so far it's pretty good writing but the problem is the filler you flesh out charectors the viallains to evilize them but we only need like 1-2 chapters. we haven't got much proggression of the main charector other than hes philosophical, clever and likes his wife. It's been 76 chapters yet hes only had 5 important things happen to him, the caravan, the first fight, the theives guild, the marriage fight, and the starting of the canal. The interactions within the village is pretty good but there alot ot filler in that as well. Its 250k+ but I believe that it can be shortened to keep the pace well.
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Where one sees nothing but opportunity another will see slavery and want nothing to do with it. Some thrive on the unknown and exploration, others with nine to five and football. Actually the majority fall into the later but...
for some reason when i imagine what Nuru sounds like when she talks............i imagine her sounding like Augra from the Dark Crystal.
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Well thats a disturbing image and sound... If you want to know what she would sort of sound like in my head: Swahili accent.