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The game has begun and the players now turn their gaze upon each other under the watchfull eye of the one that sits on the throne.
#FareedDidNothingWrong
At this rate this story will end up being much longer than the whole LoTR series even though they share the speed of plot progression.
Okay things are getting interesting. It’s not often you get to see the antagonists and protagonists under the same roof like this. I’m definitely looking forward to seeing what happens next.
I think Fareed needs to be made aware of Verick’s existence. After 65 chapters, it feels like there’s way too much of a disconnect between these two characters, despite how obvious it is that they will become vicious rivals in the future. I honestly believe that making Fareed aware of Verick will help raise the stakes at little, or at the very least, bring the sword hanging over Verick’s head down a little closer.
I wanna know, is the story going to end when he takes over and unites Zebrica, or are you going to show in-depth changes and developments when he rules. Like a Empire Building/Management Story
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I know when it will end but it will not end with one act of conquest.
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Huh, makes sense. Xd
And so the "political" game of chess begins. Only one question remains: which King will fall first?
The music I'm listening... I can't tell if it fits with this chapter or not, but another interesting one brought to the fold, Nawra and Ismat... wonder how these two will fair?