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Any chance of getting back to the mc its been three chapters now
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This story is not just about Verik but all of them including the world as it evolves.
I didn’t expect an entire chapter devoted to Shahid. Glad to see that he survived; I thought he was gonna get killed for sure.
I don't like the spear was left behind because if specific ways the spear was made could be tracked back to its origins
Ex.1 carvings/ornaments
Ex,2 how it was made during process (treatment/style)
Ex.3 What its made from (wood/minerals)
(just the few main examples of how cultures in same areas can be distinguished from one another based on how they made their weapons/tools)
However this would be bad for the M.C, If somehow the wealthy family that was "holding" Shadid's sister had connections to Fareed or as said named's government
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Panicked people with zero experience make stupid mistakes, like someone driving 175 MPH down the highway with 40 state patrol screaming after them, they throw a gun out the window and think: "Hey! They cant trace that to me!" Meanwhile all 40 dash cams on the 40 cars record it.
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I don't think it's going to be traced back to Wete or the MC; I'm pretty sure(not 100%, but close) that it was one of the one's Verik picked up while on the trade route. He gained several weapons, if I'm not mistaken, and a few of them were spears; one of which he gave to Shahid.
You know what I think will give Verik's future rebellion a more logical ability to win against Fareed? War-beasts. No one has ever used them in any of this kind of story as far as I have seen, and that makes NO sense to me. Sure, an animal of that size is expensive to maintain, but the power it gives your army outweighs the cost. I mean, I would be scared out of my wits if a large creature was charging at me, and it could smash through the front lines to break-up the formation while also causing havoc in the ranks. He has, at least, both rhinos and elephants to chose from in this land, the later being easier to tame because of their high intelligence.
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yeah, I did think that too: the spear not one of wete's .
However the author did remind us [twice] that the spear was dropped.
1. during the action when he was spotted which he in turn ran
2. Shadid remembering the spear he dropped in turn was the same spear the M.C had given him.
The only way which you said, "Verik picked up while on the trade route". If that's the case then, I'm just being too suspicious and worried for no reason