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Good chapter, double word error?
An absolutely amazing and brilliant chapter once again, don't understand why you aren't happy with this chapter as it's very well done. I have to say this is my favorite story on the site, so thank you for writing such a great story. Also I do have a question, I remember many chapters ago when there was a mention about camels.
If I remember, it was between the princess and a smuggler contact of her's. As a result I was wondering is there the idea of Verik using camelry? Of course this would be much later in the story and would take much to set up something like a camelry corp but it would be awesome if that is the case.
Very well done sir or madam, very well done indeed!
I mean, I liked the chapter. Look forward to the next one
The attackers are slowly falling apart into a internal conflict and our defenders are running out of decent troops due to casualties and militia breaking.
George Washington himself said that you can’t rely on militia, so never rely on militia to do anything but eventually retreat.
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Well our hero, (ha ha hero) has his job cut out for him, and he’ll have to have everybody he can find on the wall., maybe he can use straw dummy’s to booster his ranks.
I must say, when I first saw your story it was fairly decent, but now I would have to say it’s one game f my favorite reads I look forward to.
Thank you for a great story.
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Sir.
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Yes.
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We shall see.
Action packed chapter! Looking forwards to seeing what is done about the ones who ran away. How will they be punished? Also have a hard time visualalizing Altayah's creative uses for the ladders, although that might be my fault.
Great chapter.
Nice, a first taste of victory.
I really hope Nyah survives and joins Verik...
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Public flogging or caning maybe.
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Their use is coming.
The best chapter of the story at the moment, great work
well they got one true advantage time is on their side they just need to survive long enough
Ah yeah new chapter! I wonder which walls will Khada and Nyah be sent to?
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Ots true but when farred learn of the fortifications he will kill them most likely