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MLP: FiM
Equestria Girls
Sad
Slice of Life
Long-retired, former Principal Luna wakes up in a barn and finds herself talking to a horse with wings.
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Luna
Vice-Principal Luna
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Time and Times

Celestia spends an inordinate amount of time talking to herself. One day, she talks back.

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LunaFan183

LunaFan183 #1 · Feb 21st, 2018 · 1 · ·

wow....... love soooo much!!!!!

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Majin Syeekoh #2 · Feb 21st, 2018 · 6 · ·

This felt strangely cathartic to read.

Dave Bryant

Dave Bryant #3 · Feb 21st, 2018 · 1 · ·

Yes. Just yes. All the yes.

JFalk

JFalk #4 · Feb 21st, 2018 · · ·

Really good. Just surprised that there is no mention of Sunset (since she was student of both Celestias...)

FanOfMostEverything

FanOfMostEverything #5 · Feb 21st, 2018 · 7 · ·

Truly beautiful, condensing mountains of world building and future history into a mind-bogglingly compact package of implication, intimation, and human Celestia occasionally slicing through the crap. Brilliant touches all around, especially the name of Luna's motorcycle. You've still got it, Arch. Don't doubt that for a second.

Dave Bryant

Dave Bryant #6 · Feb 22nd, 2018 · 3 · ·

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“Were you curious, perhaps? About age? Sunset often told me, before she left, that you were ageless and unchanging. Like the sun.” Celestia lifted her sight to the hills and pointed toward that same sun, drifting through the afternoon toward the horizon.

Pearple Prose

Pearple Prose #7 · Feb 22nd, 2018 · 3 · ·

I absolutely adore this. The only thing I dislike about it is that I didn't get my greasy editing hands on it beforehand. The conversation between the two Celestias is absolutely riveting, and really makes me think about what I might do to explore the same conceptual space. Cos damn dude, talking to your own immortal self? That shit's cool.

JFalk