One evening while Granny Smith sits and enjoys the sunset, she finds herself paid a visit by Grand Pear. The Pear patriarch wants to thank Granny for being the better pony and taking such good care of his daughter, but Granny Smith doesn't feel she deserves such praise.

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I like this, but the accent is a bit heavy, so I suggest you tone it down a bit when granny Smith is speaking.

Nice short story and it's believable that Granny Smith was willing to disown Bright Mac when he and Pear Butter got married.

This was really wholesome-somber at the same time.
Great work.

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