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J Carp

I'm an old sourpuss.


Moon Dancer has been awarded a prestigious grant to study the Everfree Forest and its history, and so she's moving to Ponyville. In the midst of settling in and making new friends, she meets and becomes completely enchanted by a shy, animal-loving pegasus.

But as these two nervous little weirdos start an adorable, awkward relationship, it becomes clear that not everyone is happy about this turn of events.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 10 )

I really like this story. I didn't even think to put Fluttershy and Moon Dancer together as friends, but it actually makes a lot of sense.

Great job. Can't wait to read more.

By the way, it's funny you mentioned zoos in the story since I am a Zoo Keeper in real life.

Okay I’ll bite. What’s with the (Yellow) in the title?


I'm actually very much in favor of zoos in real life!


Okay I’ll bite. What’s with the (Yellow) in the title?

It is an extremely obscure reference to a very strange and unwatchable movie. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/I_Am_Curious_(Yellow)

The story doesn't have anything else to do with the movie, it's just... they're both yellow.

Awww... That was so nice. Despite a couple of typos and a few non-interrogative sentences ending in question marks, I had a great time reading this. Keep up the good work, you have me for the long haul.

This is a ship I have neither seen, nor heard. I am all for it! It's adorable! I must have more!

That’s a ship I never considered before...but I love it!:pinkiehappy: I’m gonna start track this one from now on.

By the way, I’m pretty sure Moondancer’s name is spelled as one word, not too. I don’t know if that was a conscious choice or not, but when I read ‘Moon Dancer’ instead of ‘Moondancer’, I find it a bit jarring.


I always pictured it as two words in my head, so 'Moondancer' just looks weird to me. Hopefully it isn't too distracting.

Rainbow please don't screw this up for Fluttershy, it'll only do you more harm than good

Funny that Rainbow Dash is the one who’s most understanding of Fluttershy’s past, yet the least understanding of Fluttershy’s current relationship. Protectiveness turning into possessiveness, I guess?

Interesting bait-and-switch on that old chestnut “One of the mane six is homophobic and that causes drama”. Twilight’s reaction here does seem more in-character for her.

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