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Krickis


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When Applejack asked Fluttershy on a date, she was honestly surprised that the shy pony accepted. Of course they're best friends, but who would have thought Fluttershy was interested in anything more than that?

All Applejack has to do now is make a good impression. How hard can it be?


Also available as an audio reading

Written as a birthday present to Pasu-Chan, who also did the gorgeous cover art :yay:
Edited by ArchAngelsWings and mouch30 :ajsmug:

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Comments ( 19 )

I'm not normally a flutterjack or appleshy shipper, but this was very enjoyable! :heart:

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Thank you, I'm glad you liked it :twilightsmile: Especially considering you don't ship them, it's quite the compliment that you enjoyed the story anyway :ajsmug:

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Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it :yay:

Can I tell you again how awesome you are? Because it's the case, thanks again Krickis :yay:

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Normally I fully encourage anyone to tell me how awesome I am, but in this case it seems out of place. I mean, have you seen that cover art? You're by far the more awesome between the two of us here :ajsmug:

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Another masterpiece my good sir:ajsmug::scootangel:

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Thank you :twilightsmile: Glad to hear you liked it :ajsmug:

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of course I liked you really know how to make ships work:twilightsmile::pinkiehappy:

As soon as I get a chance (probably not for a few days) I think I will have to make some art of AJ with a flower in her mane, and Fluttershy with AJs hat.

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Ooh, if you do send a link my way, if you don't mind. I'd certainly love to see it :yay:

This was really good, definitely going on my favourites list. Can't wait to read more stuff from you!!!:pinkiehappy:

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Thanks, I'm glad you liked it, and hope you'll enjoy anything else of mine you decide to read :scootangel: Although I ought to warn you, Applejack hasn't yet played a huge role in any of my other stories :ajsmug:

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Lol, your welcome and by the way, you write Applejack really well so good job!!!:pinkiesmile:
And don't worry, I will enjoy every other story of yours!!!

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Thanks, she is a favorite of mine. Actually thinking about it, I just realized her and Fluttershy have been in every pony story I've written. Huh.

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Lol, I noticed that actually.:pinkiesmile:

I really enjoyed this! This was an expertly done AppleShy shipping story, something I think there is criminally too little of! The characterization was truly spot on and the story was very sweet, interesting, and believable. Every scene was just so perfect! And the dialogue! A+ on the dialogue.

Great story!

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Thank you, I'm glad you thought so :twilightsmile: while it's not my normal ship Appleshy is definitely one of my favorites as well :yay:

“Aww, that’s okay.” Initially, Applejack hadn’t planned on dressing up either, but over the days while waiting for this date, she’d convinced herself it was a good idea and had Rarity help her figure out an outfit. Speaking of Rarity, what was it she had suggested Applejack say? “You look positively divine already.”

Applejack got advice from Rarity? Sigh... we all know where this goes...

“’Course ya didn’t. I just, uh, I’m not so hungry is all."

I think it should be "that’s all."

“Don’t worry about it.” Fluttershy added sauce to her burger, and took a bite. “This is really good. Sure you don’t want some?”

Ah yes, the classic "saying no to fries but then staring at your partner/friend/sibling eating theirs", it’s happened to me before.

“I don’t know. I bet you’d look really pretty with flowers in your mane, too,” Fluttershy said, causing Applejack to blush.

Imagining that had me grinning like an idiot.


the artwork is probably the reason you decided to read this

Haha, uhm... yes, no offense the story was amazing, but good cover art tends to draw me in further to a regular old romance.

I wish we had a bit more background as to when their feelings developed, but other than that this is great! I haven’t found a FlutterJack I was interested in so far, and then this one hits it out of the park for my first FlutterJack (and any fic in general) from you!

Gets a GOOD.

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