• Member Since 19th May, 2015
  • offline last seen September 16th


Be kind. Everyone's fighting their own secret battles. <3


A nice quiet neighborhood in Cloudsdale, home to a little yellow filly with a pink mane, her sick mother and her father who works long hours to provide for them. This little filly's quiet, kind, and well behaved. The pride of any parent. The one you wish was yours. Her life's gotta be perfect. Right?

Cover art line work by Dessert, color by me. (Will fix later when I can get a hold of Photoshop.)
Edited by Krickis

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 18 )

10/10 would recomend

That really was a good story! And I'm happy Krickis recommended it or I wouldn't have found it! But, I agree! 10/10 :pinkiehappy:

6651189 Thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed it! :raritystarry:

Wow, the feels, they are all mixed up. Good chapter, I'm looking forward for the next one ^^

6652637 I'm so happy to hear that you liked it! Thank you! :twilightsmile:

Fabulous! I absolutely-tutely ADORE these kind of stories! Let's me think a bit and appreciate the characters more...! Anyway, thank you for bringing this to us and I hope to see more soon!

6652980 I'm really happy to hear it! I'll try my best to get more out soon. :twilightsmile:

I follow Krickis's blog posts, and he mentioned something about this. So I had to check it out, and I was impressed.

I'll track it for updates, and its pretty much a guaranteed a slot in my favs when it completes.

6672215 I'm happy to hear that you found me! :pinkiehappy: Happy to hear that you were impressed! :twilightsmile: I'll try super hard to earn those spots! :heart:

What an interesting start! I'm always a sucker for these kinds of stories, and I can tell it's going to make me feel some intense emotions :raritydespair:

Can't wait to read the next chapter!

6676558 Thank you so much for stopping by and checking out my story! And yeah it's gonna be a bumpy ride... :fluttercry:

Fabulous start! :raritystarry: I'm interested to see where this leads.

Wow I really want to learn more about Breezy. It was a nice chapter (worth the wait) ^^

6952365 I'm super happy you liked it! :raritystarry: I was worried people would be upset with the hints of sad thrown in there... :fluttercry:

6962137 Well unfortunatly we already know her fate so the sad is bound to happen ^^'

Can't wait for this to update again

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