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Robipony


The man who likes ponies but also likes monsters... so what's wrong with him combining the two? ;P

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You are a unicorn stallion, who serves as a professor at Canterlot's Magic Academy, aiding the gifted youth in their magical training. However, due to your diligence, you have been unable to find your special somepony, something which has been weighing heavily on your mind as of late.

As Nightmare Night begins you decide to work late in the library when you hear a noise. Investigating you discover a few of your students performing a magical ritual. After sending them away, you attempt to clean up the mess. Unfortunately in doing so, you accidentally managed to complete the ritual, summoning an exotic and understandably surly creature into Equestria.


Warning! This story contains: an alternate take on succubi, suggestive content, annoyed individuals becoming friends (and perhaps more), maids and cuddles?

I've always wanted to create a story about a succubus that could also be safe enough to make it onto the Monster Mare Story List and here it is. I hope you all enjoy. :scootangel:

I came up with this story for Nightmare Night (🎃Halloween🎃), one of my most favorite holidays.

:derpyderp1: Holy Cow-pony! This story was on FiMFiction's Featured Page, 10/29/19 - 11/1/19. :derpyderp2:


Credits

Preread, proofread and edited by: Quillian Inkheart.

The cover art was made by: marking. They are a great artist. If you need some cover art, then you should totally commission some cover art from them. :pinkiehappy:

There is also a reference sheet for Silken Soul that was made by: ZettaiDullahan, which you can see here.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 78 )

Oh I hope this gets featured. It's such a nice kinda fluffy story about a succubus!

This was such a good read and an interesting deviation on typical succubi lore. Fox is right; this deserves to get featured. I certainly wouldn't be opposed to seeing more of Silken Soul in the future, even if it's only for Halloween; seems more appropriate that way, tbh. Well done on another excellent piece! I eagerly await your next story.

This was a really cute story for the holiday. I'm disappointed to not see where things go from here but for a short one off story it's great. The teasing and interesting conversation was all very engaging and enjoyable. As has been said, this was a nice twist on Succubus lore and what they might be like in Equestria. Well done and thanks for sharing it with us.

9912889 Me too. Lol. :rainbowlaugh:

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9913062 I'm glad you all enjoyed it, I really had a lot of fun writing it. :pinkiesmile:

I still have a few ideas left over, so I will probably have another story with Silken Soul in the future.

Fluffy and funny, with good characters to boot. I would like to see more of Silken.

9912889
9912984 So I might be wrong, but looking at the featured list on my phone it looks like the story, might have actually made it. :pinkiegasp:

Goddamn it, stories about succubi should not be this fluffy. ...And Cadence set this entire shindig up, I know it. I don't know how, but she gave a certain four the idea to summon Soul knowing who would find them.

I would greatly enjoy a sequel, or more chapters, or just more of this in general.

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9913562 Well, a lot of people like it and it did hit the Featured Page, so I suppose at some point I will have to write a sequel at some point. I do have a few ideas up my sleeves. :scootangel:

Tickle me intrigued. First time I've seen such building on succubi anywhere, this was a good read dear author and I certainly hope a sequel might make it out in the future!

I like how similar this is to a manga called Shachiku Succubus no Hanashi. The story is about an overworked salary man having an encounter with a succubus and having nothing more that relaxing/happy dreams including lewd handholding.

9913942 I actually have read Shachiku Succubus no Hanashi, or at least a part of it. While I had the idea of Succubi feeding on dreams prior to reading it, I might have been inspired a little bit by the manga while writing my tale.

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I called it! it was too good a story to pass up!

"Now you don't happen to have any reservations against falling in love with a succubus, do you?"

Given how blatant of a flirt this was i feel like there should have been a heavier response to this like him being flustered similar to the rest of the date, aside from that one gripe i have (which is a personal opinion on things not saying there is a mistake or anything like that) this was an amazing story

9914071 I suppose that makes sense. I probably just didn't think of it like that. :twilightsheepish:

Still I am glad you enjoyed the story. I enjoyed writing it. :pinkiesmile:

This was far too fluffy and I love it!
Even creepster cadence possibly stalking them through a dream!:raritywink:
Thanks for the great read!

Stalker shipper Cadence's best Cadence :rainbowlaugh:

9914256 I'm not too sure I know what everyone means by Fluffy, but thank you. :twilightsmile:

9914669 Indeed.

I'm all for the usual succubus schtick, but this was a nice change of pace! Job well done.

I like it! The characters are funny but not comedy funny(if that makes sense?)

I would love to see more of this

An interesting story though I am a little confused on one thing; is that implication at the end that cadence is the succubus? In which case does Shining know about her...activities?

9915321 Are you asking if she is Silken Soul? If so than, no. Cadence and Silken Soul are two different characters.

As for if Cadence is a succubus, well... This story takes place a long time before their marriage, so if she is, at least at this point in the story Shining Armor is unaware of it.

I never expected this stuff to be this... sober ?
And I'm glad it was, made it really nice and refined, great job.
I was very enjoyable.

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Fluff is all the cutesy romantic things in situations like this, such as the cuddling and other heartwarming stuff. Pretty much the complete opposite of smut, like two sides of the same coin. I definitely prefer the fluff side of the coin myself.

9915989 Yeah, I like fluff too. I do like to tease my readers from time to time. If that makes any sense. :raritywink:

More!

This is adorable, I love it!

*smashes table on the floor*

Another! :rainbowkiss:

Ah that was a super sweet story. Also a really interesting take on Succubae.
I'm assuming prolonged contact won't end up with them eating your soul or something equally horrible?

Hmmm.
Stumbled on this by chance, nearly judged it by the cover, read the comments, gave it a chance.

I'm glad I did.

This is sweet and heartwarming; certainly an original idea to me.
I would be most happy to hear more from the Professor and the Succubi.

I kinda want to see more of this. Like, "second date and onwards" more.

Yo lemme get a fuckin' uuuuuuuuuuuuuuh

S E Q U E L

I wasn't sure what to expect when I started reading this story but I was very pleasantly surprised by how much I liked it, and would love to see a sequel to this.

9918804 Goon hm or bad hm? :rainbowderp:

Since you asked, yes, please write more of this sometime. :twilightsmile:

9915989
Agreed, but the best is obviously fluffy smut.

9915448
That was what I was asking, yes, thank you so much for the answer!

Makes me curious about what our future teacher's entanglements with Cadance might be...if he has any of course since I do see the story is listed as complete ^^;

This has to be one of my favorite depictions of a succubi ever. It's that good.

I'm really hoping there's some sort of sequel to this, it'd be fantastic. Great story that I'll definitely come back too.

9920625 Well, while this is a oneshot there is nothing saying that there won't be sequel. :raritywink:

9921485 I'm glad you enjoyed it.

9921571
Well! Then I shall remain optimistic for future instalments.

9921571
I will definitely be looking forward for more Succubus stuff. Especially if they're this sweet and cute .3.

Comment posted by Jonathan Chesnutt deleted Nov 11th, 2019

This was not at all what you expect when the term Succubus is heard, and I gotta say, you didn't disappoint in your delivery of this fresh take on it. This was heartwarming, as is the usual for your works, (Huge fan of yours, by the way) but you really went out on a limb here to grab hold of your usual style while bringing demons of seduction into it. It worked, I don't know how, but it worked. :rainbowlaugh:

Jolly good show, Mr. Robipony, jolly good indeed.

9968883 Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it. :twilightsmile:

Poor thing, growing up like that, glad she found skmeone to 'teach' her of better things :rainbowkiss:
Way too cute there *dies*:ajsmug:

9971984 I'm a little confused by your comment. Would you mind clarifying it for me?

9972008
Which part, the part about her having a difficult youth or the part where she started flirting with him and it was adorable?

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