This story is a sequel to Missed Stop, Monstrous Meeting
You are a unicorn stallion who has just arrived on the Haywaiian Isles by airship to gather some research for your next book. As you step off the ramp, a few pounds lighter after the wobbly ride, you meet your tour guide and begin your exploration across the islands.
While the diamond dog by the name of Holly might be your tour guide, there are other interesting characters that await you here in Haywaii. Some of which can be pretty intimidating. Enjoy your stay.
Note: It needs to be noted that I do consider the story: Somewhere, Beyond the Sea, by Lupine Infernis to be canon with this story/universe, so if you don't wish to spoil that story for yourself, please go ahead and read it and come back here. You will understand why.
Of course, if you don't want to, then you don't have to. It is merely a suggestion.
My good friend, Quillian Inkheart, was a big help when it came to working on the Haywaiian setting. In addition to his advice he also preread and edited the story for me.
The story was proofread by: ShadowblazeCR.
The cover art was created by: Pigeonsmall, who did a really awesome job with the artwork.
Here is a link to an image of the main shark mare of the story: Jagged Nibble. Drawn by Grim_Grin and colored in GIMP by yours truly.
As you can see, FiMFiction needs more shark pony stories and I am more than happy to oblige.
We really need more monster-mare stories.
9615025 Well, fear not. I am working on it.
We even have a contest going on in the group.
Shut up and take my Upvote!
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You know I get The feeling that the shark pone accidentally did something awful
9615442 You will have to wait and see. Chapters will be released on a weekly basis.
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Awesome
I loved this, found it wonderfully charming!
Shou be doo! Shou, shou be doo!"
Your awful for this. Good start, loved the last story so I’m excited for this one!
9618127 I know. Someone had suggested the song to me and I hope I wrote the scene in a way that it both worked and made sense.
I am glad you like the story. My plan is to release the remaining chapters gradually every Friday.
Hello. It looks like I got my wish, with the limits of second person narration explored in a longer story.
I like it more than the previous one too, with a promise of more developed plot.
There are some typos of the switched word kind - autocorrect won't catch those.
Also, you seem to have taken an interesting route with omnivorous ponies - most writers who do it go the opposite route, with pegasi being the meat eaters (being the most bird-like) and the unicorns the most "delicate" dedicated herbivores.
9619113 Yeah, admittedly when it comes to the unicorns eating meat, I was inspired from an older fic I heard Obadscribbler do a reading of a while back.
Booo, Booo!
9625153 What? Why?
He's a fun drunk
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What? a friendly poke. Why? To see your reply.
9633744 I just thought you might have been upset for some reason so I thought I would ask.
Do you like the story so far?
9627749 He is.
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Oh I have not read it.
I liked this chapter it built up the world and fleshed out holly and her family
SHARK PONIES
Yeahh another check on my list if i have one
I love sharks! I didn't know this (the Shark Pony) was a thing!
9649336 It is, however it is more popular in art than it is in fiction. Thus I wrote this.
If you look at the cover art, one would think you don't need alcohol to realize how cute she looks. If they were to go by your avatar, however, it would be a different story… sorry, comrade.
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Why isn't it as popular in fiction, though? The air-breathing, land-walking ability of the pony combined with the majestic awesomeness that is the shark makes this species too tempting to NOT use!
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Caller: *calls into Channel 93.9* Hello, DJ Sharp… if you take requests, will you play a song by The Cramps? Maybe "Surfin' Dead", "Garbageman", or "Uranium Rock"?
poor jaggi
Attention, Rob: You made some mistakes as of the posting of this comment:
TF is this "Jay" character? Is it the reader? Did you misspell "Jag"? Is it a new character? So. Many. Fucking. QUESTIONS!
Don't👏🏻add👏🏻unnecessary👏🏻commas!👏🏻
I don't mean to sound rude, but these things trigger my inner Grammar Nazi!
9654676 Indeed.
9657139 Yeah, it's a misspelling. I wrote this story on my phone and apparently at some points in the story the phone's autocorrect would change Jag to Jay.
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Fail. You had ONE job, Auto Correct! ONE JOB, and you failed miserably!
When does Diana Darvey show up?
This guy is destined to have a monster mare/hybrid as a partner isn't he
9668116 Maybe...
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I ship them
Can we get a sequel? Also:
It's "bare necessities".
Try one of these:
See? Didn't those sound much better?
Stop👏🏻adding👏🏻unnecessary👏🏻commas!👏🏻
Unless you're talking about the month, don't capitalize "march".
That looked like a word was either missing or added unnecessarily. Try one of these:
Anyway, can we get a sequel?
9668446 There is a sequel of sorts in the works. A certain avatar image that I had a while back gave a hint as to its nature.
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I don't know why, but I hoped Reader and Jag would end up together.
Wow that was a shocking ending.
9733645 I hope you liked it.
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I did enjoy it and I can't wait for more story's.
Nice chapter.
9736131 Thank you.
9736136
You're welcome also your profile pic is adorable.
We did he's drunk Jim.
Yeah can see biting your friend could be s bad thing.
I'm gonna need a bigger knife...
Heavy.
This was a very nice story and I can't wait for more.
9736171 Thank you. There is a sequel now available if you haven't seen it.
This is some nice informational world-building, totes to you.