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Sunset decides to summon some help to research the mirror and ascension. Unfortunately A human soul found it's way in her clone. Inspired by Sunset Reset(https://www.fimfiction.net/story/291812/sunset-reset)

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Comments ( 15 )

An interesting twist on the concept of human in the body of a show character. I'm looking forward to seeing what you come up with for this. Liked and followed!

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Not really all that new. A recent story I remember reading with a human inhabited clone is A fateful flurry (https://www.fimfiction.net/story/536277/a-fateful-flurry)

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I've read that one, it's one of my favorites. The other one that springs to mind is a more recent one, Out of Cadence. (https://www.fimfiction.net/story/547039/out-of-cadance)

I meant more that I hadn't seen one with Sunset Shimmer.

2nd like cause I can't give one per chapter

Will the human counterpart of Sunset Shimmer appear in this story?

Once upon a time you died a death you will never remember. You believed this would be the end. Fortunately, the light heading your way growing brighter and larger seemed to promise otherwise. As the empty void around you fled from the light, you began to feel familiar sensations. Unfortunately, one of them you wish you could have been left without. A pit in your newly forming gut tells you there was something in your past life you were denied. Something small, yet so crucial, it's absence leaves a hole you wish to fill, even as you begin your new life.

:trixieshiftright:

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I think it’s too early for that, minimum should go beyond chapter 10 to ask that question again

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The first draft of this opening sounded too much like something I've read before, so I tried to make it more original. Did I manage, or does it still sound too familiar? Or maybe you just think it sounds cringey?

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There was an idea that Sunset Shimmer doesn't have a counter part because it's her destiny to connect the two worlds. I'm going to be using this idea, so no.

Okay wow she's just playing this straight huh? And I like the way they came to the solution being to come to this action.

"So, Sunset. I mean Twin-Sun." Silver Smith begins. Polished Silver huffs and almost voices her argument before a stare from her mother reminds her of what almost happened the last time she went down that road. "Have you given any thought of your future?"

Wonder how Twin-Sun shall do at the Ponyville Schoolhouse.

Y'know, if I had a nickel for every time I've seen a fic where a human soul is placed in a clone of a canon character and is adopted into their family, I would have three nickels. It's not a lot... but it's becoming a trend.

That night as she tells her tale, a group of timber wolves venture outside the forest. The timber wolves are scared off by a certain phoenix on a mission. The phoenix makes it's way back to it's partner for said mission, a mare in golden armor.

Did that phoenix just prevent Bright Mac, and Pear Butter, from winding up dead by timberwolf attack?

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Yes but I'm not sure I want to keep that in.

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