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Crescent Pulsar


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Ranma chases a potential cure for his curse in Equestria, which — unsurprisingly — goes awry.

Now there are two of him, one male and one female, and the latter has to come to terms with it and forge a new life.


I commissioned the cover from Crowne Prince.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 39 )

Interesting but, the near lack of dialogue is off-putting, and am I the only one who can't see the likes?

Why does female pony Ranma not have red hair in a ponytail in the cover art?

He heard someone knock on the door, followed by the voice of Celestia asking if she could enter, then his male self giving her permission. He continued to stay where he was on the bed and kept his gaze fixed on the wall, since he hadn't figured out what to do and wasn't feeling any better about his choices.

Don't do that, don't describe a scene, write it, write Celestia knocking, her dialogue, and male Ranma letting her in

Well, this is interesting. Lots of repressed feelings, huh? I'm looking forward to where this goes.

Interesting how you portray Ranma's view on her female side, how she thinks in it she doesn't need to hold herself anymore

Ranma should looked into worker's right and healthcare of equestria before decided whrere to stay.

Well i dont know this Anime(or whatever it is im assuming anime) but i do like transformation!

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I did it that way for a couple reasons, but the main explanation is simply this: limited POV.

Adopt her?! Okay, I can safely say THAT caught me by surprise!! Not a bad opening to the story so far.

As much as I'm really starting to enjoy this story, i hope we can see more of how just change to Ranma has effected BOTH sides of him. Specifically his male half and the Nerimans in general. Not to mention I wanna see more of Sunset! Sunset Shimmer is my favorite!

Man, it's over already? Dammit. Why is it that all the really well written and/or interesting stories always suffer from premature deaths? I really wanna see where this story could go!!

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Premature death? Have you looked at the date this was posted? o.O

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I have. I also know that this is generally the spot where most other crossovers just suddenly stop being written because the author lost interest.

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Well, I would give it a few months instead of making such a hasty claim, but you're not wrong. I certainly hope this isn't the end of what looks to be an entertaining story of fluff and self-discovery.

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From the track record of this particular account.... I would just made peace with it if this story suddenly stopped.

Oddball
Healthy as a Horse
Tangled Up In Purple

She hesitated before earnestly admitting, "And lastly, I am interested in adopting you."

This is just the right reaction.

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Because she has a cloud mane instead, due to a combination of high magic generation (which at extreme levels can cause mane transformation) and being part pegasus (which lowers the threshold for mane transformation).

I'm interested to see where this goes, but I'm not really getting any 'Ranma' ya'know? I can chock the lack so far to shock or similar issues, but I hope to see a more lively Ranma.

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Yeah, that's part of why I was reluctant to publish at chapter four, because I wanted to reach the point where Ranma completely shakes off the sulking and brooding.

This was fun, thanks for writting!

Una

This is a really good story so far! I hope you continue it with his male prospective as well in the future. I'd love to see how Twilight thinks about the princesses new son.

This really reminds me of a fanfiction.net ranma story where ranma and his female self split with the two keeping their personalities, it followed the female ranmas side of the story with her dealing with being the male ranmas "curse"

This was a fairly interesting story, it sets up some promising future storylines so I'd love to read more. My biggest problem is with Ranma still being called him and he, I know in her own mind she's still male and would prefer being referred to as such but I find it off putting but I prefer it when the writers use the current body's gender pronouns as the constant he and him makes me forget ranma is stuck in a female body.

Esta buena la historia
Me gustó mucho

Una

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Do you have a link to that story? I'd be interested in reading it. Thanks

You know, Sunset Shimmer's plan in the first Equestria movie would probably have made more sense if it had been Furinkan High than Canterlot High.

Me gustó mucho la historia 👍

Holy dam your alive !

Yeah it would be pretty hard to suddenly change your gender, good to see you are taking this seriously author

"Do you want to use a pony name?" Celestia queried.

It's entirely possible that Ranma is the Japanese equivalent of Crazy horse. Actual meanings change with the characters used.

"Arcadia," Celestia provided with a smile.

I wonder if Ranma would be familiar with the anime Space Pirate Harlock. If so Ranma might have mixed feelings.

I'll definitely be interested to see where this goes.

Una

(Arcadia) a possible MLP G5 villain reference possibly? Love the updates by the way!

Well this was nice, I enjoy seeing Ranma so nonplussed around people that geniunly want nothing but the best for him.

Celestia nodded her head. "Age spells are very restricted, to prevent somepony from abusing it and living indefinitely. Most of the ponies who qualify for it are those who had been comatose for a very long time."

Ah yes, we can all avoid death now... Let me just restrict this, the only immortal should be me, giving a bullshit cryptic and moral reason should be enough to justify it to anyone with less than a brain cell.

The cuteness is rotting my teeth ^_^. So far I'm enjoying the story. Can't wait for more.

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