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Crescent Pulsar


Through the storm, may you become a rainbow. ― Devin Townsend

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Luna takes a trip to familiarize herself with Equestria's advancements, as well as places that had not been settled a millennium ago, and discovers something that requires an explanation from her sister.

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That was great!

Oh god... Though somehow I think Luna will come back to her senses after a few days.

And to think it all started with an innocent crescent shaped moon on a lone outhouse. :rainbowlaugh:

8192328 Nah...Luna's totally pulling a prank on her sister.

8192865 Or she'll get better once she finds and destroys every outhouse with a moon on it.

My name is Nomenclature Moon!

This came SO out of nowhere, I'm wondering if this story lacks a "Random" tag...

I liked how Luna chased everyone off.
Also Celestia admitting everything without (much) hesitation was a good choice. It fit very well with the rest. A very show-like reaction.
If she had stalled and Luna had to take other meassures to get what she wanted, it could have easily gone over the top and feel exaggerated.

And so, Nomenclature Moon became Equestria´s first Grammar Nazi.:rainbowlaugh:

:moustache: Wow...what in Equestria did I just read. From what I've wrote though, people could very rightly so say the same things about my stuff. Hehe, reminds me of an essay my mom said she had to write in school about something and the different names it can go by. She chose to write about the toilet. (the loo, head, porcelain throne, etc.) So in conclusion, good job. I enjoyed it. :pinkiehappy:

Considering that you're the one who wrote this, Crescent, I can't be too surprised. I can't say I liked it, but on the other hand I didn't spontaneously combust either.

I knew this would be funny, but oh my gods, that was great.

I assumed it was because that is where the night soil comes from.

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