Your Moon Precedes You

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Luna takes a trip to familiarize herself with Equestria's advancements, as well as places that had not been settled a millennium ago, and discovers something that requires an explanation from her sister.

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SeventhBrony

SeventhBrony #1 · May 27th, 2017 · 1 · ·

Oh boy!

Mkchief34

Mkchief34 #2 · May 27th, 2017 · 1 · ·

That was great!

Xanderfox

Xanderfox #3 · May 27th, 2017 · 1 · ·

Oh god... Though somehow I think Luna will come back to her senses after a few days.

SuperPinkBrony12

SuperPinkBrony12 #4 · May 27th, 2017 · · ·

And to think it all started with an innocent crescent shaped moon on a lone outhouse.

Sigmacipher

Sigmacipher #5 · May 27th, 2017 · · ·

8192328 Nah...Luna's totally pulling a prank on her sister.

Xanderfox

Xanderfox #6 · May 27th, 2017 · · ·

8192865 Or she'll get better once she finds and destroys every outhouse with a moon on it.

Calmsoul

Calmsoul #7 · May 27th, 2017 · · ·

My name is Nomenclature Moon!

This came SO out of nowhere, I'm wondering if this story lacks a "Random" tag...

I liked how Luna chased everyone off.
Also Celestia admitting everything without (much) hesitation was a good choice. It fit very well with the rest. A very show-like reaction.
If she had stalled and Luna had to take other meassures to get what she wanted, it could have easily gone over the top and feel exaggerated.

Raistlin

Raistlin #8 · May 28th, 2017 · 3 · ·

And so, Nomenclature Moon became Equestria´s first Grammar Nazi.

Wonderbolt Writer

Wonderbolt Writer #9 · May 28th, 2017 · · ·

Wow...what in Equestria did I just read. From what I've wrote though, people could very rightly so say the same things about my stuff. Hehe, reminds me of an essay my mom said she had to write in school about something and the different names it can go by. She chose to write about the toilet. (the loo, head, porcelain throne, etc.) So in conclusion, good job. I enjoyed it.

Curtis Wildcat

Curtis Wildcat #10 · May 29th, 2017 · · ·

Considering that you're the one who wrote this, Crescent, I can't be too surprised. I can't say I liked it, but on the other hand I didn't spontaneously combust either.

Snowflake Dissonance