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THIS CONTAINS SPOILERS FOR ASSASSIN'S CREED IV! DO NOT READ UNLESS YOU DON'T CARE ABOUT SPOILERS OR YOU'VE BEATEN THE GAME!!!! You've been warned.

Celestia lost faith, in herself and Equestria after losing Luna. So she abdicated her throne and left, to a place where Princess Celestia doesn't exist, and neither does magic, or ponies for that matter. After all, she was no longer Celestia, Princess of Equestria, but Anne Bonny, a perfectly normal Irish girl.

Well, as normal as you can get, being a barmaid in Nassau of all places.

Taking place after the events of the game, she reminisces on all her memories of Earth, both good and bad, the night before Cadence's wedding.

One-shot for now, but depending on reader reactions, this may become a full-fledged story.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 62 )

Short, sweet, and to the point...though I would have loved to see more of the characterization of Celestia/Anne in order for it to seem more grounded in MLP lore. Perhaps more dialogue between her and Edward during her stint as Quartermaster for the Jackdaw, or maybe even a tender moment between her and Edward (that isn't his death scene that is).

On the other hand, this story could have used some better material for the sort of Epilogue that you included when she went back to Equestria. You said that "She would follow her late-husband’s example, no matter how much it hurt her!", but I didn't actually see what Celestia did to follow that example. Ruling a country doesn't seem like something Edward or The Assassin Order would do, so I am a little curious to see what she did to do so. I can see ruling with a fair and benevolent hand, but you never actually mentioned that at all.

All in all, this is the first ACIV: Black Flag crossover that I've seen. Good job on the technical aspect of the writing (for the most part), and good job on the premise. I give it a 4/5:
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

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Thanks a lot for the feedback! I appreciate your help. :twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:
And a mustache. Because everyone likes mustaches. :moustache:

I must know what happens next, when can we expect an update? Please?

Then she sees a new star in the sky and, the next day, gets to see how far humanity can go.

I must say this was really good man, I mean the story kept me going and wondered if Edward ever will come to Equestria because Celestia wanted him back or any of the Gentlemen of Fortune. I think you missed one member: Captain Kidd. I mean it's still good and all, I'm hoping for a sequel just as good.

3465038 If you're referring to Captain William Kid, his pirating career began in 1689, ending with his execution in 1701, 14 years before the Golden Age of Piracy. As for James Kidd, well... that's spoilers. :trollestia:

That was good.
Next. Chapter. NOW!!

make it a full-fledged story!!:pinkiehappy:

Almost made me cry, but then again I get really emotional really easily.

There needs to be more of this. I can't help but want more of this. This is just too good to not want more. Please more, please.

Edit: Now I want to see Edward come to Equestria some how, just to give Celestia a little closure.

dude, best. FUCKING. STORY. EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Really good story, I enjoyed reading it. :twilightsmile: Really hope this continues past a one-shot would really love to see Edward's reaction to Anne actually being a pony princess from another world. :pinkiesmile:

The first Assassins Creed IV crossover I've found. Been waiting fore one since forever, and for this I thank you. :moustache:

will she be going back to equestria?

3465421 yeah I got to that part and i must say I laughed and Edward's reaction.

Finaly ac4 crossover waited so long please continue as fast as possible and don't hesitate to ask for help or inspiration

Absolutely love it, just wish she had mentioned Adewalé since he played a pretty good sized part in the group.

More now or I will send assassins

( not really but really more

This fic has a good potential. One-shot is good too, but I kinda hope this becomes a full on fic.:twilightsheepish:
I wouldn't be surprised if she created her Order of Assassins based on the Creeds ideals.

THERE GOT TO BE MORE EDWARD KENNWAY FIC!

Good story. I am hoping for more.

Also here's an idea I had but you don't need to use it. If you do plan to add Ade you can make him a Zebra.

Um... Hello there... I really don't want to pry or anything, but... Um... Is this story going to be a one-shot or are you adding more chapters, because this story was really exceptional and I would love to see more of it... please... :fluttercry:

Kenway's going to have fun in this new world, I have a feeling...

That's... *Sniff* Beautiful. :fluttercry: Keep going.

when are you going to update. and dont forget you can ask me for help and idea's

CHAPTER 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!!:heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:

Edit: I LOVE IT!!!

...:facehoof: Ed, ya just JINXED yourself...Them changelings are a-comin'

*Looks at notifications*
Yes... Yes. Yes! Yes!!! YES!!! YES!!!!!!!!!!!!

OH MY GOD THERES AN UPDATE I LOVE YOU SO MUCH RIGHT NOW

Reads: OH MY GOD NOW I JUST GAH:pinkiegasp:

if changelings attack can Edward fight as well?

Realy Edward and good old Adewale let me ges the jackdawn crew is dare too 600 strong and able :rainbowwild:

:facehoof:
ed Why you just had to call out murphy there
that said i really do enjoy this i look forward to the next update also i know how much calculus sucks so i feel you man

Nice job man, this chapter brought sadness to the pit of my stomach. :applecry:

:pinkiehappy: A story with my favorite assain (adawale) Yay Yay Yay:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

This story have quite a potential, when will you update? or will you even update it?

Here, she could be Anne Bonny,

*spits out drink* waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaatttttt?:pinkiegasp:

Just reading the first few paragraphs and am already pump for what happens next

Hey bud, uh, not to sound like a prick or anything, but it's been a little more than a year. Is this story gonna be getting an update?

so where do i have to go and how much do i have to pay for you to continue this i need a third chapter where the two meet again

I'm really flattered that people keep reading and commenting on this, really I am. You guys deserve to know why I practically abandoned this story. It's not a very good reason, but it's all I've got.

Simply put, I'm still going through college. When I first sat down and started writing this, I was still fresh out of high school, and, well.. to say I wasn't very prepared for college is an gross understatement.

I made a ton of mistakes that put me into a pretty bad position, culminating with being placed on academic leave. So, for the past couple of years and five semesters worth (4 Fall/Spring Semesters, 1 Summer) I've been trying to bring up my GPA to a high enough level to get back into University. I put so much effort into this, that I pretty much, well... forgot about writing. It's kind of a shame, since I had more than a few ideas planned for it, and now, almost three years later, they've kinda... fallen off.

I do want to get back to writing, but I can't promise anything. Thank you for all our support, though! I really appreciate it, and I'm sorry it took me so long to get back to all of you.

-TheHiddenOne

6890690 please come back to this story as fast as you can! it is a great one

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