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All hail best human Sunset Shimmer! Now welcome all to The Destiny of the Ancients

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In another dimension, Sunset never became the demon and bully of canterlot High; instead, she let her desires for power and recognition push her into the sport of Sensha-do (the art of the tank), where girls learn how to control and fight WW2 era tanks. Sadly, something happened at the Blue Medal Cup and made Sunset abandon Sensha-do and change schools.

She chooses Canterlot high because it is a school that has no Sensha-do program and will finally leave behind whatever happened back then. In the school she meets new and old friends and destiny comes calling, forcing her once more to take command of a tank. This time not for personal honor or power, but to help Rainbow Dash and the school, regain honor and glory after years of losing at everything.

With a Vice-Principal Luna that is doing everything she can to stop the girls from reviving the Sensha-do team, to the shenanigans and craziness that follows the Equestria Girls no matter the dimension; Sunset and the rest will have their hands full.

Join Sunset and the rest of the girls in this comical and highly explosive new adventures as they dive into the world of tanks!

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Haven't read this yet, but I assume it has to do with tank-paintballing?

Also, in your long description:

forcing her once ore to take command

forcing her once more to take command

so you gave this its own story about time

Looks very promising. Just don't give up on this story as many writers do!

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No, its not tank paintball. its based on a series called Girls Und Panzers. Where Highschools and universities form "tanker leagues". Teenage girls pilot real tanks, often nation themed, with highschools generally using WW2 tanks, and universities using Korean war tanks or later.

These are real tanks, with real guns. but the crew compartments are reinforced with modern composites and extra padding to limit injures. there are different game modes, annihilation, capture the flag, etc. with tanks winning by knocking out enemy tanks to where they can no longer fight.

Here's a song that is suitable for this story

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Btw, can someone translate the lyrics for me

Girls und panzer story? confirmed, we have girls und panzer story.

Yesyesyesyesyesyes! I loved this series! Still do, since I'm such a WW2 tank fan!

Well that puts a damper on things.

I'll gladly read this as I work on my own, though! Panzer vor!

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I never seen this anime before, but the video has me interested now

8419357 There’s also a movie that takes place shortly after the events in the anime.

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Most of what happens in the video come from the movie, which to be sincere is extremely good, but unlike the series, it just takes rule of cool and runs with it to the extreme.

look good, I kind of hope sunset knews sci twilight and sci twilight is skill at keep tank running, and end up join up out of loyality to sunset...
other wise good start

Oh dear lord, the grammer...

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Its great. The story, the tactics, the diversity of the cast...

“Heya Sunset, are ya still lookin’ fer people?” the bow wearing girl asked while the other two alongside her smiled widely and Sunset already knew they had a plan. She was so going to regret this.

Oh god. She's giving the CMC a tank? Well this isn't going to end well. The M3A1 may be a small light tank, but it can still do some serious damage if operated incorrectly. :facehoof::trixieshiftright:

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This is the CMC we are talking about. I fully expect their brand of spectacular insanity. Wrap in fear for what these three are going to pull.

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:facehoof: That should be weap not wrap. My autocorrect must hate me.

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It was mainly used as a scout tank, but if used correctly, could easily go toe to toe with another tank.

Someone find this person an editor please

Of course the CMC get a tank. Of course, it's a Crusader. And obviously, Scootaloo's going to want to get air with it.

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This can only end well. Absolutely nothing can go wrong with this idea. Nope. Nothing at all.

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Almost useless? The M3A1 was, for it's time a pretty good tank. Granted it had almost no real armor, but the thing was FAST for a WWII era tank, I'm not sure of the exact top speed (between 20-50 mph, MAYBE, I'm not sure, it was capable of drifting after a sudden change in direction at top speed). With the kind of speed it had it didn't really need the armor, it was a light tank used for recon and harassing the enemy, it was basically the Destroyer Class of tanks. With an experienced crew it could fire five or six rounds from it's cannon a minute, in a city it could theoretically out perform most other tanks of it's class and could hold it's own against medium tanks from the same era. Line up a shot, fire, move to another position, fire, duck into a nearby ally and squeeze between two buildings at the rear of an enemy, fire, duck back into another alley and escape before being over run and retreat from the battlefield at top speed, it didn't last long in a direct engagement.

Oh and by the way this is a great story so far, you've actually gone and got me hooked

Can someone translate the lyrics of the panzerlied I kinda want to know

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There's a video that explain the m3

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Haven't seen Girlz und Panzer, but I really want to. This makes me want to watch it more!

8449079 Didn't Sunset say she was going to put the CMC in the Honey? wow that sounds wrong out of context.

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Why not watch a subbed version on youtube? I mean, i would have translated it, but i found around 3 english subbed versions​ with a single search, some at last a couple years old, so it's not as if they were posted between your and mine comment

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The reason I need a translation is because first, I don't speak German. Second, there's lots of different versions on Youtube which I don't know which is which

I'm really happy they got a Crusader III, when I play British in war thunder that is my go to. Also what model of Stug did they find? Me and my find will tend to run a Stug and KV1/2 combo where we stack with me and the Stug in front(kinda as a sheild )and him riding my bumper to cover me in the kv.

You have my tanks for writing this.

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But also funny. And better than tree sap...

Comment posted by ratedoni deleted Feb 19th, 2018

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In the words... like most things that I have sadly... is quite the backlog.

mind you, she was still new to the place so she wasn’t really certain what things had been build

Built.

So it was with some trepidation that Sunset Shimmer had followed her two friends into what seemed an abandoned garage build

So it was with some trepidation that Sunset Shimmer had followed her two friends into what seemed to be an abandoned garage building

"Welp, ah guess we blew this whole thing sky high,” for only answer Rainbow’s glare was trying to make a hole right through the blonde girl’s head due to that comment. It was true that the plan didn’t go the way they wanted, but it was a little too much to speak about it in that way. So much for having a sure way plan that could in no way fail; apparently it could if the person you are trying to recruit not only refused the recruitment, but also all but screamed in their faces that the last thing she ever wanted to do was Sensha-so. If Sunset Shimmer -who had been heralded as the future of the sport- wanted nothing to do with tanks, then what possibilities the two teenagers had of reviving the club.

"Welp, ah guess we blew this whole thing sky high.The only answer to that comment was Rainbow's glare trying to burn a hole through the back of the blonde girls head. It was true that the plan didn’t go the way they wanted, but it was a little too much to speak about it in that way. So much for having a sure way plan that could in no way fail; apparently it could if the person you are trying to recruit not only refused the recruitment, but also all but screamed in their faces that the last thing she ever wanted to do was Sensha-so. If Sunset Shimmer -who had been heralded as the future of the sport- wanted nothing to do with tanks, then what possibilities did the two teenagers have of reviving the club.

“Pure favoritism if you ask me; apparently the team has been performing so bad that they had to find a scapegoat and it ended up being me. That uncouth plebeian that calls himself coach wanted to give me a warning due to my, and I quote, poor performance against beatable opponents. Pure fallacy since he decided not to let me play against Crystal Heart,” looking at he usually very pale girl grow more and more agitated was something new to the two other girls since they had never seen Rarity lose her composure “so I decided to hand my resignation and went to look for you. Like I said, I know you are trying to get a new team to open the Sensha-do club.”

“Pure favouritism if you ask me; apparently the team has been performing so badly that they had to find a scapegoat and it ended up being me. That uncouth plebeian that calls himself coach wanted to give me a warning due to my, and I quote, poor performance against beatable opponents. Pure fallacy since he decided not to let me play against Crystal Heart,” looking at the usually very pale girl grow more and more agitated was something new to the two other girls since they had never seen Rarity lose her composure “so I decided to hand my resignation and went to look for you. Like I said, I know you are trying to get a new team to open the Sensha-do club."

Sunset’s idea worked in the last few days she had been at Canterlot High, she even had fun which was not something that people or ponies that knew of Sunset in the past will believe, but it was true. Sure, she wasn’t the popular kid in the bunch, but she preferred to be a little far away from the limelight this time, it would help her stress problems.

You know for a moment there I thought this was one of those rare EQG fics that didn't involve a former unicorn Sunset Shimmer. It'll be interesting to see how/if you incorporate the regular EGQ storyline into this.

I don’t know, you tell me, you work on this place,

I don’t know, you tell me, you're the one who works here,

“I’m not talking about Miss Dash here and about that tank; it was used before I even started to work on this school. What I know is that the previous Sensha-do club left it here after their last lost. What I wanted to ask, is what exactly is this whole notion of you and your friends trying to revive the Sensha-do club Miss Shimmer.”

I’m not talking about Miss Dash here and that tank; it was here before I even started to work at this school. What I know is that the previous Sensha-do club left it here after their last loss. What I wanted to ask, is what exactly is this whole notion of you and your friends trying to revive the Sensha-do club Miss Shimmer.”

Is pretty normal, I mean, you have the NCAA schools,

Its.

Well, technically speaking, it was the position of leader that Sunset was a natural at, almost as if she had been groomed for something like that.

To be honest, one of the most common fan theories out there is that Princess Celestia intended Sunset to be the bearer for the element of magic, but for obvious that plan went south.


Quick question. if Applejacks family moved into the area then how was her mother a student at CHS?

The Trixie Team meanwhile -named by Trixie herself, although the rest of the team would reject the name each and every time-stood behind, taking are of the tank found at the theater, already seeing how back the situation was with the powerful machine.

The Trixie Team meanwhile -named by Trixie herself, although the rest of the team would reject the name each and every time-stood behind, taking care of the tank found at the theater, already seeing how great the situation was with the powerful machine.


It's nice to see a Girls und Panzer crossover. After having recently rewatched the series on Netflix, ( a little more convenient than digging out and putting in the discs), I must say that this has promise. You will be updating at some point I hope?

Also, nice reference to the show being based on real if exaggerated events, (within your world of course).

resurrect the story

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