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Neutral Boy

First time of writing my own stories on here since the first episode of my little pony friendship is magic.


(Crossover Anon-A-Miss and the Kirby 64: The Crystal Shards.)

Two lives that were outcasts after craving of world domination. One life named Sunset Shimmer once turned into a demon in order to rule the lands of both worlds, but was later defeated by Twilight and the gang to stop her. The other life named Zero Two took over some planets like Ripple Star, a planet populated by fairies. Though his grown of power didn't last very long when Kirby teamed up with Ribbon to gather all of the crystal shards and obliterate Zero Two.

This is the story of how Sunset, the former bully at CHS met Zero Two, a fallen Angel with amnesia from outer space.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 41 )

Grammar needs work but it’s a ok start.
Do like the image you have of Sunset.

Sunset looks adorable with her rain coat or uh suit on. :twilightsmile:

I've played the game and my brother too, but it took us a while to get to the Zero Two final boss battle

Please tell me you are planning on continuing this story.

It's a slow progress, but I'll continue to work on it and a couple of new stories that'll be published soon. I'm not going to give up on this story that easily for sure. There hasn't been any other Zero Two stories so I won't let this one being gone, not on my watch. :rainbowdetermined2:

There have been others but they have been discontinued or cancelled.


This seams like it could be interesting.:pinkiesmile:

Can't wait to see how Zero-Three will be like.


Sunset bringing him home.:pinkiesmile: The picture.:pinkiesad2: The scars and dark maters.:pinkiesad2::rainbowderp:

put more word the story is moveing to fast

Well, certainly don't want to be the girls right now.

This is awesome i love this keep up the great work

Great chapter and question will Kirby and the gang will meet the new zero

It's a mystery, you'll have to wait and find out.

So this is the boy , definatly new start .

Comment posted by Kevin shough deleted Jul 11th, 2020

I am liking this story so far! I want to see more cuteness between sunset and zero! I look forward to more.

Patience, I haven't given up on this story. It's still a work in progress on writing a new chapter.

I find it both touching and terrifying that Zero Two wants to help Sunset.

Glad to see this is alive, nearly forgot it existed.

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