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Neutral Boy


First time of writing my own stories on here since the first episode of my little pony friendship is magic.

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Ever since arriving in Equestria, you, a local male human in Maretropolis, had some hard time of adjusting among every pony while sometimes having restless sleeps and headaches. After getting into an accident, you wound up in a pony hospital where you can spend a few weeks of peace and quiet. Although, what you didn't realize that there would be some "friendly visitors" checking in on you every day before the snowy winter of Hearth's Warming Eve starts.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 28 )

I wouldn’t mind seeing a sequel. I wanna see how much luck he has, and judging in this story alone, he has a lot of luck.

DUDE SEQUEL AND HOW ABOUT A SERIES !!!:pinkiehappy:

let me know it i can help edit...

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You're in luck everyone, I'm planning to make a sequel of this story soon. Probably making a couple of chapters first, one with a bonus chapter and the other chapter a teaser part for the upcoming sequel.

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Question, since this is herds will this be a rgre story aswell?

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Yes, like I said one for a bonus chapter and the other a preview teaser for the sequel.

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Yep, especially for the sequel coming soon.

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do u have a time line and do u need an edit or ? / proof reader ?

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Probably need a editor and proof reader since I haven't done a second person story part before.

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Oh, well that nightmare/dream part will be explained later for the sequel in the chapters.

Just wanting to put this in for everyone to keep it a reminder.

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You can pm me for help with the edit.

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You mean the two intruder girls in his bed?

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Those two girls will make an appearance and explained later in the sequel.

Is the sequel also going to be a slice of life story?

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Interesting indeed.

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Eh sort of in some chapters.

Sooo, will this ever get that sequel?

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I'm still working on it in progress. Just need to get all of the notes and things down for the plot before going to work on a chapter for it.

Great story but way too short

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