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RusticPrince


I'm a newish horror writer, I love horror stories and movies, I might also swap around genres. Hopefully everypony else will like them too

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Cast aside and forsaken as Anon-A-Miss, Sunset tries to find the strength to continue…but what she doesn't know is that companionship will come in the form of a four wheel demon…forgotten…heartbroken…angry

Cover art done by CreationStation#0086 on discord

[Undergoing major rewrite]

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 281 )

Oh, Rainbow... I’d like to say it was nice knowing you, but we all know that’s a lie.

Shit is about to go down

Yyyyyeeeeeesssss, let the darkness flow through you Sunset

Elsewhere in the cafeteria nine girls sat together, seven of whom had they're heads hung in shame as they got they're assholes reamed by the princess of friendship. None of the seven had ever seen someone so angry, or heard such a story of depression, hate and loss as the honest truth Sunset told them. She had told them the pain and agony she had gone through after the whole she-demon incident, and then she finds out her own friends don't believe she's changed?

I’ll be honest with you, I probably would have tuned it out.

"I know" Chrysalis said with tears in her eyes. "But promise me you'll watch all your students for the changes Discord went through."

Changes?

Then she heard it, the sound of metal bending and grinding, turning around ever so slowly she bore witness to something extraordinary, the engine that was a complete mess of bent and broken parts was now completely repaired, smiling to herself she walked in front of Christine said "Alright, show me" with a smile on her face.

For the second time in her life Christine had a demonic smile in her soul for Sunset wasn't afraid of her, she wanted to know, to bear witness. So Christine complied her headlights clicked on in what others would call an eerie baby blue Sunset called it gorgeous, as Christine's engine rumbled to life on its own, her shredded white walls rebuilt themselves and refilled with air, her bent chrome and bumpers straightend and shone with beauty, her windows reconfigured and pieced themselves back together as all the holes in her body screeched and bent closed. Her seats re-stiched themselves as her steering wheel became circular once more, and as the last of herself repairs finished she sat rumbling wait for Sunset to react.

Oh Rainbow Dash your so screwed. You didn't know that Christine can repair herself. Give them hell Christine.

How da fuck do you romance a car?
Can Christine take a humanoid spirit/demon form or something? Cause other wise I don't know how her and sunset would get together physically.

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Sunset: Make Rainbow Dash and her accomplices PAY, Christine! 😈 😈 😈

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I don’t think it can. Which is probably a good thing.

I'd hate to be in Rainbow or the Dazzlings as Christine and Sunset's fury has been unleashed onto Canterlot High.

As night fell over the junkyard, the moon cast its pale gaze upon the scrap and clunkers, owls hooted and a few nightly birds chirped. The wind blew in a slight breeze, for not a soul should be at the junkyard, but as sparse clouds rolled across the moon's surface, six teenagers walked briskly to the entrance of the first bay of the garage at Grogar's Junkyard and Garage. Each of the teens had a wicked smile adorning their faces, two held sledge hammers, one had a knife, two had crowbars and the last held a split maul¹. As the teen with the maul grabbed the handle to the garage door to lift it up they turned back to their group with an evil smile adorning their features, throwing the door up and open as silently as they could the six teens took notice of the car they had come looking for.

With their weapons in hand they smiled to each other, "Alright guys, no backing out now we destroy that she-demons' ride and she finally leaves us all and our lives go back to normal." Rainbow said standing on the hood of Christine, drawing her sledgehammer back she let it come forward with a mighty crash of metal striking metal, the force behind her sledge bending the hood slightly. As Rainbow continued to strike the front of the car, Garble and Trixie took their crowbars and began puncturing holes and smashing the rear lights, Gilda with her knife wrenched the front door open and began tearing at the front seats and console. As the radio tried to spark to life she slammed her knife into it killing it instantly, Flash who held the other sledgehammer concave the roof of the car and smashed the windshield as Rainbow continued her assault on the front.

Soarin slammed either end of his split maul into the car, either creating dents or wrenching holes in the metal of the car, and as the six teens took their frustration and anger out on the car. Their evil grins never left their faces, so as the last strike from Rainbow's sledge rang out like the tolling of a bell, she whistled to get the other teens to stop and as they did she motioned for them to leave. Because there was no rebuilding the beaten junker in front of them, so smiling ear to ear and chuckling slightly the six teens made their way out of the garage each going their own way once they hit the main road, not knowing what they had just unleashed.

Okay! I'm getting really tired of their mother******* "Evil" Smiles and Grins already!!!!!!!!!!!!

I really hope that when Christine shows her true colors, they will be horrified, regretting their dumb decisions.

And I want Christine to finally run them over. And BREAK their f****** Teeth to tiny fragments!!!!!! :pinkiecrazy:

With their weapons in hand they smiled to each other, "Alright guys, no backing out now we destroy that she-demons' ride and she finally leaves us all and our lives go back to normal." Rainbow said standing on the hood of Christine, drawing her sledgehammer back she let it come forward with a mighty crash of metal striking metal, the force behind her sledge bending the hood slightly. As Rainbow continued to strike the front of the car, Garble and Trixie took their crowbars and began puncturing holes and smashing the rear lights, Gilda with her knife wrenched the front door open and began tearing at the front seats and console. As the radio tried to spark to life she slammed her knife into it killing it instantly, Flash who held the other sledgehammer concave the roof of the car and smashed the windshield as Rainbow continued her assault on the front.

Soarin slammed either end of his split maul into the car, either creating dents or wrenching holes in the metal of the car, and as the six teens took their frustration and anger out on the car. Their evil grins never left their faces, so as the last strike from Rainbow's sledge rang out like the tolling of a bell, she whistled to get the other teens to stop and as they did she motioned for them to leave. Because there was no rebuilding the beaten junker in front of them, so smiling ear to ear and chuckling slightly the six teens made their way out of the garage each going their own way once they hit the main road, not knowing what they had just unleashed.

Her tires sliced so much they were like ribbons, her chrome bent and distorted. The seats so shredded the inner foam was leaking out in small bundles, the radio shattered the steering wheel bent into an odd oval. The worst was what was painted onto Christine in black paint, still drying where the words 'Demon', 'Bitch', and so many other names, Sunset broke down as the one thing that brought her happiness was destroyed but her sadness soon ebbed into anger. And that anger flowed through her veins with a boiling fury, Twilight about faced and started marching towards the school anger clearly written on her face.

Well, that's step one of two lists.

-The List of How To Make Christine (and her fixer) Extremely Mad
1. Damage Christine.
2. Leave her to repair herself.

-The Possible List of How To Vanquish Christine For Good.
1. Damage Christine in such a way as to limit her movement.
2. Crush Christine into a cube to buy time.
3. Work fast before Christine repairs herself.
4. Melt Christine down.
5. Turn the steel from Christine into at least ten separate ingots, stored separately from each other.

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I wonder what everyone’s reaction would be if she pulled up in the same car?

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I was actually just think about these. Because, when you think about it christine isn’t really hard to beat.

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But how else are the two of them supposed to shag?
...and it just occurred to me that I should be put in horny jail. Oh well.

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Why are giving out a list of ways to beat Christine???!!! We all know that they ALL DESERVE for what's coming to them ( Except Twilight ). And Christine is not the "bad guy" here.

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Maybe christine has an exhaust pipe she can use.

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Well considering I haven't brought sci-twi in yet I have plans for this very specific and naughty vision. Because if everyone/thing (counting spike) has a persona in the mlp-verse why wouldn't Christine. But that's were it becomes hard, what would she be? Some type of changeling? Succubus? I know she couldn't be a wendigo or siren? Maybe a siren? Its very very hard, so if anyone has a good idea let me know any feedback would be accepted

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I know this may be risky, but I think I would get rainbow dash to destroy it again.

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I don’t know about the other guy, but I don’t know. I guess it’s just something I like to do. As for Christine not being the bad guy, well I don’t think I’ve ever heard of a good demon.

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Well, that’s unexpected.

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I won't deny that.

The only thing that you need the list for is if Sunset and Christine get... out of hand.

Besides, we can't be sure that there's no influence from Christine in Sunset's actions, but the revenge squad should have known better.

You don't want Sunset dying like what I assume happened to Discord, do you?

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Do you think Christine would give them the chance?

Do you think Sunset would give them the chance?

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What do you mean out of hand?

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No, but who said anything about GIVING them a chance?

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If they hurt Sunset, Christine will go ballistic.

If they hurt Christine, she'll just come back.

So do you really think they'd let it stand?

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Had a cousin who got shitfaced drunk and actually tried that.
It.does.not.work.

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That’s why I said it’s risky.

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Have Christine be a wraith who can posses technology.?

Comment posted by Pete100 deleted May 13th, 2021

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Well, part of it would be what we saw happen to Arnie in the original film. You know, increased aggression, paranoia, probably intent to die with Christine.

Part of it would be randomly lashing out and trying to run just about everyone over, and not just the revenge squad.

We don't want Sunset to end up like Discord and Arnie.

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OH HELL NO!!!!! Please, Don't You Dare! Besides, she tried it once, and it obviously didn't work. And WHY are you defending that Deadmeat Bitch (Rainbow Dash )???!!!

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Their are some "Good Demons" in rare cases in some shows. Like in that Devil May Cry T.V. Show for example. Their is a "Good and Honorable" Demon. Besides, I would rather let Christine and Sunset win. Then let those terrible students in CHS win!

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I mean, if sunset wants to die with the car, then it’s her choice. I call dibs on her apartment, though.

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Who said anything about defending her. I’ll be honest with you, I was think of using her as bait for a little while.

Comment posted by Pete100 deleted May 13th, 2021

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I don't care for what happens to the students of CHS. They deserve it! And I doubt that Christine will make the same terrible mistake like what happened to Discord?!

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Don't you dare touch my Sunny's apartment dude.

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Really dude?! I don't think Twilight will allow that?!

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Question?! Why are making it that your put yourself in the story itself? Like a Self-Insert? What's up with that?!

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a cooler name for a ghost mate at least that's what I think a wraith is. I might be wrong.

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I’m just saying if she wants to die with the car someone should keep possessions safe.

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I don’t know. I just sometimes like to say what I would do or say in fanfics. You know how in horror movies people would say they wouldn’t go here or there? It’s like that.

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