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RusticPrince


I'm a newish horror writer, I love horror stories and movies, I might also swap around genres. Hopefully everypony else will like them too

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Cast aside and forsaken as Anon-A-Miss, Sunset tries to find the strength to continue…but what she doesn't know is that companionship will come in the form of a four wheel demon…forgotten…heartbroken…angry

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I am not in the slightest a fan of Anon-a-Miss stories, but this? This DEFINITELY has my attention.

Looking forward to more.

Oh shit!😨 😨 😨 😨 😨 😨 😨 😨 😨 😨 😨 😨 😨 😨 😨 😨 😨 😨 😨 😨 😨

I'm really looking forward to seeing more of this story, I've seen Christine a few times and I look forward to seeing those who have tormented Sunset to getting their just desserts from Christine.

....NOPE! NOPENOPENOPENOPE! (Flees from the Psycho Murder Car Story)

Interesting. A few grammatical errors, but I will be following this.

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But why, it'll be good I promise *demented laughing can be heard in the background"

Christine?! Oh shit!

Oh...this involves Christine...So, is anyone going to be the "James A. Janisse" of this story or am I going to be? (For those who don't know, James A. Janisse is the host of "Dead Meat", a Youtube channel that mostly does kill counts for movies).

Finally,a story about Christine in MLP EG !
I bet she would kill the girls...

I'm putting this on my "to read" list. The only suggestion I have is to make your antagonists a little smarter than trying to escape a demonic car by running down the middle of the highway in the middle of the night. (I'm looking at YOU, Buddy Repperton.)

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I love that Horror YouTube Channel!

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Oh come on! Don't give those CHS Student Assholes and the Bitches that bullied Sunset over the Anon A Miss thing, any advantages against our favorite Haunted Demonic Car.

I want Christine to PUNISH those jerks for ever hurting our poor Sunset Shimmer. 😈 😈 :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy:

Honestly I wouldn't restore Christine if I got her. Probably drop a big block Hemi and a 5 speed floor shifter in her. Add some bucket seats and make her a nice candy red with some pearlescent overcoat. Make the roof possibly white vinyl or leather. And give her side exit Exhaust with some electric dump pipes so she could growl.

Keep the radio and speedometer though. Maybe add a bolt on RPM gauge to the dash.

I love Christine. One of my favorite films and movie cars. But, now I'm very interested to see this through. Couple Grammer errors, but nice start. Keep going.

Ooooh! A crossover with a Stephen King story! And one of my favorites no less! I can’t wait to see how Sunset changes as a result of having Christine in her life! And I really hope Christine gives the Rainbooms a hard time!

She had sat rusting in that junkyard for years, alone, heart broken from the death of the only man to ever love her. She had been crushed both physically and emotionally after his death, physically because she attempted to avenge him by killing the two who dared to tear them apart. She had been cubed and left to rot alone with the other junkers in the yard, and for decades had slowly put herself back together, all while under the nose of the man who owned the yard. But what she didn't know was that love can come in all forms.

Who’s that?

"Well if that's what you want to do Sunset, I won't stop you, when you find the right one, bring her back here or grab the wrecker and haul her back here" he said with a smile on his face as he turned around to go back to the pontiac he was working on.

Isn’t that the same thing?

Even though the toreador red paint was facing from the body, and the iceberg white on the roof and pinstripe were grimy and rust poked.

What does she mean by that?

Still smiling to herself Sunset decided to see if Christine would turn over, sticking the key into the mechanism, and shifting Christine into neutral, she depressed the clutch and turned the key.

What does it mean by “she depressed the clutch”?

"Sunset, this is a 1958 Plymouth Fury, they're gas guzzlers are you sure you want this one?" He asked her, cocking one of his eyebrows at the young woman.

“Gas Guzzlers”?

Shaking his head Grogar walked away but as he did he couldn't shake the feeling he had seen that specific fury somewhere in his life and in more of a wrecked state. Shaking the thoughts from his head he headed back to the firebird he was working on and he hoped with every fiber of his being it was the car he thought it was.

If I was him that car would have bothered me all day. Also, why is he hoping that?

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Depressed-pushed down on or another word for applied pressure
Gas Guzzler-a car that has horrible gas mileage and almost literally eats through gasoline
No not the same thing one is to drive the car back the other is to tow it back
I need to also go back and fix some mistakes sometime today and you don't know much about cars do you?
Edit: hopefully fixed the major mistakes

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Not even a little. Is that required to understand the story?

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Not really, I sorta figured people wouldn't understand car lingo so if you or anypony else doesn't understand something especially in the upcoming repair chapters ask I will happily answer

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Oh ok. Also, how is this a crossover?

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Christine is a novel by Stephen King that was later made into a movie. It’s about a 1958 Plymouth Fury that was possessed by a supernatural force that pretty much made her a possessive murderer. The car from that very story is the one Sunset just bought, which is what makes it a crossover.

Body by Plymouth, soul by Satan.

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Agree,we know what happened to the last owner back in 1978...

I'd say this has potential to be pretty intense. Especially if Christine is as bloodthirsty as she was in the source material.

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It's a crossover with the Stephen King novel / John Carpenter film Christine.

Christine has officially declared her love for Sunset. That’s monumentally bad. As of now, Anon-A-Miss is the very least of Canterlot High’s problems.

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And knowing Christine since I've saw the movie. Will do anything to protect Sunset Shimmer. And most importantly the Rainbooms are very, very screwed once Christine decide to come after one of them.

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So I now have to ask:
Canterlot High, whatcha gonna do?
Whatcha gonna do when she comes for you?
Canterlot High, whatcha gonna do?
Whatcha gonna do when she comes for you?

As Sunset walked away from Christine and into the fading light, she didn't see Christine's lights glow softly or hear the small buzzing of a radio station cutting in and out.

So it begins...

Sh*t, if this girl sunset good at upgrading cars, then let’s see how good she is at upgrading my phone.

Sitting in the cafeteria of Canterlot high school five teens were sitting by themselves, each stewing in their own anger. Applejack's fist was clenching and unclenching, Rainbow Dash had a fire in her eyes none had seen before. Rarity was a bit more green than white, Fluttershy was more hidden than usual in her oversized sweatshirt and Pinkie Pie's hair was a little less poofy and a little more straight. More secrets had been posted by Anon-A-Miss, yet Sunset hadn't been seen since Friday, in fact she had completely missed school and with Anon-A-Miss still posting, things were going downhill quickly. Yet the five girls at the table had a plan they had found a book that could contact Twilight and they were waiting for a response.

This can go wrong in so many ways.

Sitting in the cafeteria of Canterlot high school five teens were sitting by themselves, each stewing in their own anger. Applejack's fist was clenching and unclenching, Rainbow Dash had a fire in her eyes none had seen before. Rarity was a bit more green than white, Fluttershy was more hidden than usual in her oversized sweatshirt and Pinkie Pie's hair was a little less poofy and a little more straight. More secrets had been posted by Anon-A-Miss, yet Sunset hadn't been seen since Friday, in fact she had completely missed school and with Anon-A-Miss still posting, things were going downhill quickly. Yet the five girls at the table had a plan they had found a book that could contact Twilight and they were waiting for a response.

Just wait until their misplaced anger will turn to Regret, and HORROR!!! When they meet Christine very soon. 😈

I so would NOT want to be one of the Rainbooms or anyone who tries to harm Sunset will meet the unholy wrath of Christine!

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Christine's invincible, mate.

pontiac firebird

Capital letter on the P and F, as it's a proper noun. Apart from that, good start. This film is a favourite of both horror fans and petrolheads.

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And Christine will make the Rainbooms and Canterlot High pay.

And so the demon in chrome and red has returned. Depending on how this plays out, there are going to be some very bad things about to happen to the Rainbooms. And, of course, nobody's going to care that Sunset has an alibi, since she was with Grogar pretty much all Friday.

So, who's first on the yandere car's smash list? Only time will tell.

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I wonder how Twilight Sparkle is going to respond to them.

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She will be upset on them for NOT trusting and bully Sunset, that's for sure.

Twilight: :twilightangry2:

Rainbooms: 😥 😓 😭 😫 😨

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You mean like Invulnerable, or Indestructible. With her Supernatural Healing/Repairing Powers. The Rainbooms and the CHS Students/Teachers that bullied or ignored Sunset are SO DEAD!!!!! :pinkiecrazy:

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What's with all the capital letters?

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You are not making any sense. Firstly, you said you "Wouldn't" Fix/Restore Christine. But AFTER YOU SAID THAT! You gonna restore her anyway by Upgrading her to a Modern "Street Racer" Type Supercar. That sounds like your being a Hypocrite, unless I Misread your comment and made a Mistake here.

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I sometimes like to do that in my comments. 🙃

Does EQG Pinkie have Pinkie-Sense?
If she does, can it warn her about Christine?

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I'm a little confused when you say "Yes"? You mean "Oh, okay then".

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The question is will she be surprised? Because, her friends already did this during the Canterlot wedding.

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The CMC better be taught a lesson for framing Sunset Shimmer. Or they’re going to Hell.

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