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When Sunset Shimmer is accused of a crime she never committed, she tries to convince her friends, and everyone, she didn't do it; however, when harmful words are said, she can only think that she is not worthy of living, but a certain special person in her life comes along and rushes to save her life, Will they make it? Or will it be too late?
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Twilight is here. Then the Rainbooms have some explaining to do with their highly unacceptable behaviour!!!
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yep they definitely have to explain big time
i'll post a new fanfic chapter every 3 days because of writing it and to spell check too.
If fluttershy was so sure, why not go after sunset? Could've stopped her before she jumped.
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Fluttershy was hesitant about going after her because of the other girls, but she then realized that moment sunset was innocent and was worried about her well being, so she decided to contact someone who can help in more ways.
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Still felt out of character. As shy and afraid as she is, she's not someone to just stand there when one of her friends are going to die. I know she informed princess but going after sunset feels more natural. What she did here felt forced. Did it just for the sake of doing it.
Twilight's got your back sunset
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this is an alternate version of the comic or AU so it would be a possibility for the characters tend to be out of character and also the reason Fluttershy didn't go follow sunset is because as she says in the fic that she had a bad gut feeling of what she did, and she regret it also she was scared of applejack and rainbow dash more if she did go after sunset because of what rainbow did in front of her.
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Yes but she not good at standing up to her friends. Remember how she became flutterbat all because her friends were sure their way was right even though she told them a different answer. And the personalities of the 2 worlds are very similar so her not standing up for what she believes in isn't surprising especially against her friends. Standing up for them is one thing but to them is another.
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And fluttershy saw how violent rainbow dash was and you would think she is very afraid of getting punched by rainbow in the sugarcube corner scene I mean she did warn princess twilight because she had a bad gut feeling because of sunset's eyes showing a lot of negative emotion especially betrayal so she called for help instead of going after her because sunset would probably run away from her and push her more into the edge you have the think of the mental state of the person because going after them yourself can be more worse than getting help to calm the individual down I learned that from a therapy classes for mental health advice and someone told me that info so I thought fluttershy can take that position plus that's going to be in the next chapter as well of how she knew sunset was going to do something and she deeply regret it.
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I think sunset would have taken anyone who might care at that point because she had nobody by her side and as much as twilight might care she not there she doesn't have see the pain sunset feels or the hate the students are giving her. She needs someone in the real world by her side and twilight is not willing to go over to offer emotional support if nothing else.
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probably, right but my plot of the story wouldn't be the same.
uh oh why do I have a feeling that Sunset Shimmer will in a coma for a long time or dead?
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don't worry mate she won't be for long she just having a conversation with Princess Celestia in her head
What's with the random capital letters?
Personally if I was twilight this wouldn't be something they get off easily. They were all selfish and cruel.
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alright fair I think there was a quote that fits this right now and its by Roboute Guilliman himself "What does not kill me... is not trying hard enough."
Updated! She's awake...
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yep she finally woke up after two days in a coma
How did she do that?
How is celestia talking to her?
I’m surprised no one is telling her to shut up.
So she was able to decide whether she lived or died?
So applejack still sees sunset as a she-demon?
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The big problem is lack of puncuations (Full stops and coma's) and spaces of parragrafs
This is an interesting route.
I hate to say it but this really feels rushed.
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I had to because of how many routes of sunset not forgiving the rainbooms a lot and we haven’t seen many fics with this route
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Yeah sorry about that I was just tired writing this was taking a toll on me because I kind of almost lost my spark because of a certain person that I was inspired by broke me and I felt like I lost it all, and I got writers block so I’m trying to pull ideas just to make it interesting but I did rush it because I was worried about the people who read the fic thought this fic was dead, sorry about that but all in all what did you think of it?
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Ummm sorry isn’t that what I’m supposed to do? Commas, end of sentences, paragraphs are punctuation my friend it’s the first thing you learn in 1st grade 😂 but anyway how did you like the fic besides the “lack” of “punctuation” when it was written correctly in a way a published author would do.
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That’s good. Especially since her not forgiving them doesn’t make a lot of sense.
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Take your time, both in writing and in healing.
We can wait.
I'm literally waiting for updates from stories that haven't been updated in years.
nice work
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So in other words,-media3.giphy.com/media/R53a4hAFV6QH6/giphy.gif
This story is in desperate need of editing, particularly around punctuation and grammar. Even just in the description and first two paragraphs alone, I'm having to re-parse sentences and mentally add punctuation to figure out what it is you actually meant, and I just can't go through that kind of effort for a whole chapter, yet alone six.
Just to show what I'm referring to, I'll go through all the problems I can see in the description and initial paragraphs.
Every time one of these errors comes up, I have to restart the sentence to make sure I'm not misreading it. The missing punctuation is especially bad because it can take a few words before I realize that I'm supposed to have started a new sentence in my head, or that what I'm reading no longer makes sense. Result is just exhausting to read, and I haven't even gotten that far in.
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Unless you don't know how to word your statement properly she has the right to see these things to people who nearly put her friend in danger
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Not really when we take into account canon.
Looking forward to seeing more.
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I feel like it was more of a "helping her hold on or helping her let go" type deal... maybe not controlling it but giving her spirit enough strength to be able to make the choice.. if that makes sense
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Interesting
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I'll put the corrections in tonight, sorry it took so long, but I'm getting a little better with certain grammar and whatnot. i hope after those corrections; you can continue reading this fic.