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This is the alternative ending to Anon A Miss originally written by Dainn. I'm just the guy who makes the alternative ending.
Anyway, this is the alternative ending of Dainn's Anon A Miss, where Gilda and her gang were arrested but Rainbow Dash and the CMC are spared.
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Small bit when was Discord there he was never there in the original
Also are they banned from all activities ok, but the last bit.
She means that all those events are canceled?
If so want to suggest not only the CMC get blamed for this but the Rainbooms as well get heat, though I stress Celestia states the reason this is happening is because EVERYONE sent in secrets on each other, thus why ALL of them are being punished.
Aaaaaaaaand that's an assault charge.
Having said that, you have dealt with the story's biggest problem; Sunset deciding what everybody's punishment is. That made zero sense.
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1. It's safe to say that Discord was among the crowd
2. Yes, she meant all school activity were cancelled
3. The only heat the Rainbooms will get is from Sunset
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I always thought the Police should be the ones who decides everyone's punishments, cuz they are the Law
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Indeed. If Sunset is deciding it, that's not justice. That's revenge.
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Yes, but I still love how Dainn's Anon A Miss story ended
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So I see.
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Another thing, the only decision she makes is to spare Rainbow Dash and the CMC but she unfortunately can't do the same for Gilda and her group
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Hmmm. As for the others, I don't think they did anything illegal.
Is this one shot? I hope not its pretty good🥰
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Well, if you look again, the story is "incomplete" so it's not a one shot, it's a hell of a story but again, I don't make promises unfortunately but I will try to continue as soon as I can
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Yes⁉️
no no you did good, and there was no need to hear Gilda and their stupid excuses.
Looks, good I know you stated that the Rainbooms wouldn't get any heat for all the activities being canceled, and ask...why?
I mean for three of them it was their little sisters or one sister figure, they get heat just for that alone.
But ok, still figure Rainbow will get flak for it for sure, since she help Gilda with getting Sunset kidnapped.
Will you follow the bit on what Sunset said, she doesn't have to do anything to Dash, what more can she do to Dash who already ruined herself.
Her rep going down big time and sure the clubs she part of will be kicking her out, more so due to so many school Activities being canceled for the rest of the year.
Also will it be address on the students who sent in secrets?
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Well, they'll be having an interesting "chat" with Princess Twilight, and boy, she's angry with them.
The CMC will also face consequences but I don't want to be one of the writers to give them even more severe punishments, that's I think sparing them and Rainbow Dash from going to jail, and the CMC being on house arrest seems punishable but not as worse as Gilda's.
Ofc, Rainbow Dash's rep is already gone when the CMC confessed to the whole school, and about the addresses of the students who submitted secrets, it's not addressed already but it's likely that Principal Celestia took care of that
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I agree on the CMC, but you forgot one thing.
Sunset was having Gilda and the others to protect them but now....
Though if I remember correctly, they were suspended from school for the rest of the year....which is what two three weeks before the new year...Ugh.
So they be back at school ready to get mobbed.
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She was about to but then again, Gilda and her gang committed serious crimes and nearly killed her, ans the Law can't allow them to just walk away, they had to take them away for the sake of the Law and Sunset is not in control of that decision
Hell hath no fury like the Princess of Friendship scorned well her and maybe Princess Celestia 😅
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I reckon it's best if Princess Twilight does the scolding
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I can already picture how it's going to start:
(everyone sits down at a table in Sugarcube Corner)
Twilight: I'm not happy, girls. Not...happy. Ask me why.
Pinkie Pie: Uh, why?
Twilight: Why what? Be specific, girls.
Rarity: OK, darling. Why are you unhappy?
Twilight: Your betrayal of my trust makes me unhappy.
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Yeah, something like that
Wow...I don't care what others will say, I find this to be...very in character of Twilight. After all the other countless stories I've seen where Twilight just yells at them and chews them out; showing no mercy, it's nice to see Twilight showing the Rainbooms that there is a chance to find the silver lining in this and that unlike Sunset; who at this point mind you all is not as experienced with friendship as Twilight is, she's not completely giving up on them yet.
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I'm glad to you enjoyed it so far
You can find other stories where Twilight still chews them out, but remained merciful to them and give them an opportunity to fix their mistake.
And I'm glad to be one of the authors who took this approach.
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Cool.
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Yeah, am I the only one who dealt with that problem or there's more authors that let the police do their job instead?
Anyway, I'm glad you're likely reading the story and I hope you enjoyed it
I like to see Sunset make some new friends, because it be a long time she can ever feel comfortable around the others Dash most of all.
Wall Flower if you put her in the story wonder what her role be, after what happened, I don't see her using the memory stone as before.
Hope she doesn't bad enough she erased memories even small stuff but shudders way too dangerous to use.
So I hope Sunset notices her and becomes friends also with Sci Twi if possible.
Hmmm 🤔 now I kind of want to see how the Friendship Games will turnout if these events happen I wonder how will they save the day then🤨
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If you read Dainn's Anon A Miss, then you'll learned that the Friendship Games were cancelled sadly but they brought it to themselves.
And don't worry, I'm sure Sunset and the girls will still save the day somehow
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I never thought about Wallflower to be honest, but given what's happened, I doubt she'd used the Memory against Sunset, but who knows??
And I believe Sunset will have new friends evej though she had Snips and Snails on her side
I don't see them being friends anytime soon if ever but I can see them as acquaintances at best, maybe a vacation for Equestria is in store though I also hope Sunset makes more friends I can see Sci-twi being introduced by Celestia or Wallflower
, Trixie, maybe Vinyl too, we'll just wait and see I guess🤔 Thanks for the chapter updates 🙏🥰
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Still hope Susnet bumps into Sci Twi, love for them to be friends the pair could geek out over science!!
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Your welcome. Anyway, we just have to see, lower your expectations
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Oh don't worry those are not my expectations those are my wishes and opinions which I know might not come true. My expectations for any series I read are just three things and those are: 1. an update, 2. that the series has an ending, and lastly 3. the story and the ending is at least good🤣 and so far you are doing great👍
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I appreciated!
Thank you for supporting me
Just stay tuned for more
Well, I'll read it, but why did you want to say this three times?
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Oh, forgive me, it was more of a reminder
Personally I think she has major doubts when she worked hard to show she changed and the first thing that comes along they throw her away.
Excellent Reflection and very ironic
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I thought it's neat to make it ironic for Dash.
Thanks
They say that Anger is one of the Seven Deadly Sins. Now, Dash is knowing why the ironic, harsh way. She let that and her pride get in her way of the truth and now, she is paying the price for it.
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Exactly, and Sunset may be there to intervened whenever she's in trouble, but it only makes Sunset getting irritated with her. She's trying to get peace for her sake
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It's painfully true. And to think, this whole entire thing could have been avoided if Rainbow Dash have just used her brain, said no to Gilda and walked away.
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Or if the CMC could just talk to their sisters instead of plotting against them
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Yeah that too. In other words folks, if you think something's wrong and you want to do something about it, you won't get in trouble and hurt; both physically and mentally, just do this simple 3-word advice:
USE COMMON SENSE!
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Or to quote Omni Man
THINK CMC! THINK!
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Is that an 'The Incredibles' shout-out I just read?
Why, IT IS!!
I wonder how Gilda and her cronies are faring in prison
The first bit of sentencing makes sense, but as this case involves grevious bodily harm, only a jury can make a verdict. The judge is there to decide the sentence (unless this is a Diplock court). I also feel it necessary to point out that this section exposes a plot hole in Dainn's original story, namely Swift Order's claim that AaM is attempting identity theft. This charge would fall flat on its face in a court of law because the account never claims to be Sunset (a picture of Sunset as the avatar is not sufficient evidence; by that logic using an avatar of Sunset on this site is identity theft).
You're the one who dumped Sunset on them without asking, Twilight.
In Rainbow Dash's defence, she had no idea what Gilda was planning.