When people you love are on the line, what would you do to help them? Even if getting help cost you your humanity?
Keith Hoard now has to deal with the consequences of such a choice. Prehaps, his new family will make the adjustment easier for him?
This is a TF/TG idea I've had for a bit of time and simply wanted to put to paper just to get it out of my head.
Tags will be adjusted as needed.
Edited by Celefin
Cover art is a picture drawn by AskBubbleLee on deviantart. She's a lovely artist. Go follow her or something!
Chapters (2)
Oooh is this a fic by BLUE MOON?
Hmmm I shall give this tale a read!
Jolly good start, keep going.
Wee bit fast paced
Hm... I have to agree with mango. The chapter, while interesting is... a bit too fast paced. There's no time or idle thoughts for the reader to mull over before being hit with more heavy information.
this seem good I well have to keep an eye on it :D
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Before I start reading, just wanted to point out : the gender pronouns switching is very confusing and will quickly turn off new readers. Having typos in the story description is a big red flag as well.
People won't put much effort into reading/caring about a fic if they think you don't care enough to proofread your own work.
8027117 I can guarantee that the actual story text has been thoroughly edited and proofread.
But of course you're right... one can't see that by looking at the description.
Sorry, I'm not a fan of TF/TG stories.
So... Is this a transport to equestria story, if so I'm going to list out some of the things this dude gave up for family.
Berserk,
No Evil,
Rewatching 'UNO the movie' for a fifth time
Meatspin,
All of the abridged series's.
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Yeah, it was a wee bit faster paced than I'd like to admit but why, it is just the prologue
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I will
Well, I can say that the next few will definitely be slower than this one.
8027117
My attempt to be witty failed
8027321
Well, then why did you read it?
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And his dangling bits too
8027643 And you're just a noob :3
8027689
Im not a noob... Just a little out of practice
8027706 NOOOOOOBBBBAAAAAAAAAAAA
This is mighty interesting please don't stop.
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Nuuuu
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Oh, I won't don't worry
8027780 yuss
8027780 okay but I do have a question does Keith become an Alicorn?
oh discord, you best hope that contract never gets called out, handshake and signing don't matter, magical law man, if it's for the soul it needs to be signed in blood.
It would seem that i don't need the inquisitorial shovel Just yet...
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Nope, just a pegasus. But more of that shall be revealed next chapter
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Oh boy, I actually forgot about that XD
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Heh, well, it's only just began.
8028098
can't wait not many stories like this that show such possiblity. I hate to sound rude but do you have an estimated date for the next chapter, it’s fine if you don't? I understand what it's like to have writer's block.(
) But like I said this shows much potential.
you have my attention and a like
also do you have a set update kind of pattern or is whenever you feel like it and have chapters done? feel free to not answer to avoid people nagging insanely for chapters and causing stress that leads to depression and hate of lifen
(im fine just drama 
)
Subtle fallout equestria reference? Hmm, could it be...
the main character has the same color patterns as a certain Pegasus named Calamity?
8028098 I was expecting you to say something about my abstention with shovels
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Not exactly XD
But didn't realize that XD
CHSSHHT This is Huston, we have confirmed a loss of shit, please standby CHSSHHT
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To answer both of your questions in one go, I'm not the kind to set a timetable but I can say that I'm attempting to set aside a little time each morning after work to do a little bit of writing. Granted all my progress this morning on the next chapter was just out dear protagonist going "STOP F
KING SCREAMING" to himself mentally 
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Well, I did have to resist the urge to mention slannesh in the whole daemonic buttslave thing
8027643 The TF part I don't mind. It's the TG part I wasn't so sure was in this story.
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Yeah, it did kinda pop in last minute
8028638 ok thanks for that bit of information, also that sounds like most peoples reactions to something abnormal for them so you nailed that
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Of course
Pretty interesting so far. I'll be tracking this.
8029196
You do that my good man
It's too early to say, the introduction is good.
8029196 Why must you never give me good comments on my fics? D: D: D: D: D:
8029623 I do though! :/ :/ :/ :/
Edit: I missed one: :/
8031336 but you duuuuunt :'(
I cri daddy
Go on with this one, please yes!
Some decent suggestions in the comments as well. Pacing should slow down a bit.
I will be honest, the title is kind of bland .-.
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Don't worry it'll.be slowed down next chapter definitely
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Well so is Trigger
8032962 I say bland because of lot of human into pony stories start with "Becoming."
Also I demand an update all friggin ready you nub
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A strong start.
Premise is a bit tired, must admit, but lifted by solid writing. Especially nice to see the 'deal with Discord' premise done for something so noble as saving a family member.
Hoping to see this continued soon.
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Yeah, tis an overdone concept but hopefully my plans for it'll make it unique enough.
I definitely enjoyed this. Although, I'll admit it would have been nice to see a transformed protagonist do something other than scream for once, it was otherwise very solid.
8037476 If you'd flippin update it .-.
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I was busy all weekend :|
8037654
Yeah, I admit it's cliche but it's better than ooohhh boobies,let's play with them!
Besides I wanna keep a teen rating