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Kurt Smith, a classmate of John Radderson aka Twilight Sparkle's, agreed to help Twilight after she came to school with purple fur, hooves, wings, and a horn. After acquiring the Elements of Harmony, Twilight's friends end up becoming anthropomorphic versions of the Mane 6 and Spike the Dragon, Twilight's faithful assistant. Together, they will solve the mysteries of friendship in their new lives and in the lives of others. Kurt ends up becoming connected to the Element of Honesty, transforming him into Applejack. AJ enrolls at school under the name "Ashley J. Smith".

Part of the bigger story https://www.fimfiction.net/story/360864/lavender-heart, by Skaltrox Defiance Knight, which follows the adventures of Twilight and her friends as anthropomorphic versions of our familiar MLP characters.

Main Cast: Princess Twilight Sparkle/John - Skaltrox Defiance Knight - Aspect of Magic
Applejack/Kurt aka Ashley J. Smith/AJ- kwr2k13 - Aspect of Honesty
Rainbow Dash/Matt - ShadowLight96 - Aspect of Loyalty
Rarity/Harry - Undyne Devotion - Aspect of Generosity
Pinkie Pie/Rina - Kikio3000- Aspect of Laughter
Fluttershy/Terrance aka Florence - Krushan - Aspect of Kindness
Spike the Dragon - Tempest_Flare - Twilight's faithful assistant
Lyra Heartstrings - student - Lurkinkon
Sweetie Drops aka Bon Bon - Student/Undercover Agent
Starlight Glimmer aka Sarah Gaines - Discord the Narrator
Sunset Shimmer - student - JimmyHook19
Trixie Lulamoon aka the Great and Powerful Trixie -The REAL Mister Pkmn - Stage Magician/Illusionist
Princess Cadence- foalsitter
Bent-G - New student - NicLove
Alexandra "Alex" Traveler - anthro mouse girl - ScarletRhine
Ayumi/Tempest Flare - exchange student/Pinkie's pen pal - Tempest_Flare
Excalibur Edge - Knightwolf1875 - Alicorn/Diplomatic Liaison to Princess Celestia/Luna
DJ Pon3/Vinyl Scratch - Tide Hunter - Resident DJ
Octavia Melody - Tide Hunter- Classical Cellist
Derpy Hooves/Ditzy/Muffins - Mail Carrier -
Cool Writer - The Author
The Cutie Mark Crusaders: Apple Bloom - AJ's sister -
Sweetie Belle - Rarity's sister -
Scootaloo - RD's No. 1 Fan - Ephedrian Royalty
Babs Seed- Apple Family cousin - The Blue EM2
Gabby - Mail Delivery Griffon

Limestone Pie -
Marble PIe -
Maud Pie-
Zecora - Zebra Alchemist/Shaman - Apple Frost

The Mysterious MLP Theory Analysts -- Princess Celestia and Princess Luna
Servo and Janice Star - Sisters of Maestro Star - The Real Mister Pkmn
Maestro Star - Mutual Ally of the Element Bearers - The Real Mister Pkmn
Chessmaster Star - Main antagonist - The Real Mister Pkmn
Sarah von Solero - Thestral
Gearbox - Earth Pony tinkerer
Rae Falls/Raindrops
Cheryl Lee/Cheerilee - Elementary Teacher
Golden Harvest - Carrot Farmer
Ember - Dragon Lord - IronHoofes
Shining Armor - Fujin777
Big McIntosh - AJ's brother
Granny Smith - AJ's Grandmother
Need Rarity and Rainbow Dash as well as the CMC and others.

Edited/Proofread by Tide Hunter and Chrome Masquerade
Collaborations are now open for the rest of the cast!

Chapters (20)
Comments ( 106 )

Good, I really like it. I'll follow up the email in my next chapter.

You may want to link some text to Skaltrox's story. To save time, here's a link:
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/360864/lavender-heart

Still open for collabs!
I think we may have a rarity and/or pinkie pie, and a spike, and possible rainbow dash.

7894793 well it wouldn't hurt for me to try, right? If that's OK with you and whoever else you're working with.

7894850 Who would you want to would you like to write a transformation for?

Let's see:

Skalltrox Defiance Knight is Twilight Sparkle
I have applejack
Kikio3000 as Pinkie Pie
Rarity
rainbow dash
fluttershy
spike

possible starlight Glimmer (since she needs to learn about friendship)

You forgot about the whole antics with Rina and her "fishing incident"

7897119 In my most recent chapter. Twilight explains briefly about something to do with Rina that they did later on in the day. While in this chapter, they left after the cafe part.

7897138 is that something you want me to cover as well? Because I'm eager to get started.

7897481 Yeah, if you can, go for it. Oh before you do, in my chapter I'm nearly finished writing, I give last names to everyone. Rina's is Palinski

7897494 thanks for the heads up! Should I wait for that chapter to be finished before starting mine? (I'm just full of questions tonight)

7897509 Not really, I'm about done anyway. So it's up to you, wait to read the chapter or start your part of the collab, your choice.

7897545 I'll wait so I don't screw things up by making Matt do something he wasn't supposed to do. I have one last question, but I'll have to ask over PM (don't want the majority of the comments be me asking you questions).

7897552 Oh right your doing Matt, his last name is Dashel (yes i know).

7897571 We have a pInkie Pie and Rai Komatsu will write for fluttershy. we need rarity.

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The main gist of this can be seen by reading the last sentence.
Wait, Dash is taken? Shoot, I kinda wanted to write them. Ah well, I'll stick with the editor roll, once I get back to editing...

Actually, I still want to do at least one. Let's see, with Rarity, Starlight, and Vinyl as the possible choices, I'm immediately discarding Rarity because I can't write someone like that. Well, I can easily write snobby, snotty arseholes who feel insecure about themselves, I'd just have to take myself and turn everything up to eleven (do people still say that when they want to say they increase something to an over-the-top manner?), but Rarity is the opposite of that. Also, I don't care much for clothes designs, as long as I'm wearing grey sweatpants, a white polo shirt, and a red jacket I'm golden.

As for Starlight, I shouldn't do that because I only watched a few episodes of season 6, so the only characterization of her I know of is what's in season 5 and many, many fanfictions, which leave me with the impression that she's a ridiculously powerful spellcaster who's a bit socially awkward and brainwashes people in her spare time, and is also like a secondary assistant to Twilight, even though from what I know of in the show, she's someone Twilight pressures into doing things like trying to make friends with those she isn't that compatible with on the friendship area, and if she does something Twilight doesn't approve of, then Twilight will try to pressure her until something goes horribly wrong. So yeah, I don't think I would be a good fit for writing Starlight.

That leaves Vinyl Scratch, who is, in my headcanon, mute. If we discard that, because that's just headcanon backed up by vinyl never speaking, ever, at all, period, then I think I would do decently well with writing her. Here's the thing: The one that turns into her is just the resident DJ. She'd probably appear far less than all the others, even after she's introduced, and given her nameless position before transforming, she looks like she'd be a supporting character, just appearing and disappearing at random. Actually, I'd be fine with that, just as I would be fine with that if she would be a character that appears often. Just one thing...

If I write Vinyl, would that mean I could also do either Octavia or an Octavia-inspired character, because Octavia's my second favorite background character, with Vinyl being my favorite. Applejack's my favorite pony, but she's not a background pony, and if anyone claims that she is I will write their words on a piece of paper and force them to literally eat their words.

What was I talking about again? Oh right, could I attempt to write Vinyl?

7899552 Well, sure, just ask Skalltrox Defiance Knight about that. We have all the main 6 so maybe the background ponies. I wonder if there would be enough equestrian magic in the elements of harmony to transform, say applejack's human family into anthro versions of granny smith, big mac, and young apple bloom.....

7899622 I asked Skaltrox if I could write Vinyl, and possibly Octavia, and they responded with "yes definitely okay..."
That's quite a bit of repetition.

7899552 Vinyl could use texting, like in the equestria girls novelizations of the movies. Octavia does have speaking lines in the slice of life episode and also briefly in the rainbow rocks movie, provided by Kazumi evans (who sings for Rarity and voices Adagio Dazzle in Rainbow rocks).

Okay, so this chapter seems good, even if it slightly doesn't agree with chapter five and six of my portion of the colab. I guess I could add the "new content" to my chapter, just so the difference is't quite as noticeable.

I read the first chapter, but I will never come again. Horror.

8008532 What seems to be wrong with the chapters?

8009560 Here are not chapters, but narratives. Too cliched.

-sigh- okay..... I will admit it. I haven't done my part yet :pinkiesad2: it's just that, this is the first collaboration I took part with you guys, but I'm just having a hard time fitting in mainly because of using Google Docs, and it's not easy you know! the hard part with me using Google Docs is because everyone seems to edit things all at once and it's hard for me to make my edit. not only that, but it's just so hard for me to make my first story on this website because I'm worried about well I would make it without any typos :fluttershysad:

8041627 I Propose I create the google docs story for a side story (or you can) and just invite skalltrox defiance knight, me, and or Trixie's player (the real mister pkmn). That way it won't be so intimidating.

anthros of harmony]

If you know anyone else who wants to collab as a new character to interact with Twilight and her friends, pm me or Skaltrox Defiance Knight (Twilight Sparkle, or The Real Mister Pkmn (Trixie). My story is about anthro Applejack and her family. So, there's Big McIntosh, Granny smith, Applebloom, and Babs Seed.

OC's and Canon characters welcome!

Mac graduated from school and spent his weekdays on the farm, with the weekends to relax and church on Sundays.

What does "church-goers" thinks of the Anthro ?

His teeth flattened to resemble that of an equine.

Can they stell eat meat ?

... with a brown belt with the red apple emblem from the computer screen around her waist, ...

Wait, what ?
Why did he does she have that ?

She found one in her bed stand and deftly placed it on her head, her ears poking out on either side of the hat.

How ?
Are there holes for the ears on the hat ?

8077083 Well, this story is a work in progress and I guess the church folk would look upon the pony humans with judgement, But this is before Kurt became Applejack (AJ or Ashley J. Smith to the school.

After she showered and got dressed ...

How is it, (doing those things) with her new body ?
Hooves, longer mane, fur, ...
What's different ?

Now Ah know Ah’m not th’ only one goin’ through this.

But you knew that !

make sure her little sister was off to school,

Wait, did they say they didn't have school ?

Do they hide there bodies when they walk around ?
or do they lite the rest of the wold new ?


Can they now eat hay ?
in a HayBurger

Twilight left for school through the front door. Later nearing the school, ...

Why does it start with Twilight's POV, and not A.J.'s ?

Does she even know what a Cutie Mark is ?
And how did she ?

p.s. Is Scootaloo a girl in a wheelchair, but when she becomes Scootaloo she can walk, but not fly.

They used the Elements of Harmony on a human who had become possessed by the Nightmare Force that turned them into an anthropomorphic version of Nightmare Moon.

Wait, what !?
Is the human now Luna ?
How and why ?

Ah knew Rarity didn’t want to get her mane all wet, ...

But he wasn't Rarity at that time !

Fluttershy enjoys her time at the local animal shelter,

Can she translate for them ?

After all, she’s a unicorn.”

https://www.youtube.com/results?search_query=is+sunset+shimmer+a+alicorn



p.s. Why is the Pen-pal Anthro ?

Did a human ever change into a pony there were not like ?

8077361 That is up to the person who wants to write a story featuring Scootaloo as well as the other CMC's.

8077494 The anthrofication was forced upon the human, according to Twilight, hence she was considering using the elements on Trixie, but decided Darrell, the bully who becomes Trixie in her story, is better off. She's making new friends and amends at school and was asked to do community service hours (clean up the school and also entertain kids at a local hospital, as well as talk to a person she may have physically hurt while she was a bully.

8078337 No one tuck them !?



8078342 You are replying to what about ?

8078456 No one has taken the CMC side story, and since I have Applejack, Apple bloom would be included as well as Sweetie belle and scootaloo (maybe babs seed).

8077284 I'd say they would start being vegetarians if they are anthro ponies. AJ in the story has been able to make apple-based food items like the ones featured in the show like cider and pies, among other things.

... So you haven't uploaded the full chapter yet. Well, that gives me some time. I wasn't going to upload anything this week, but I'll try and "catch up" to this point as quick as possible with posting once a week.

8211002 I am planning to update at least once a week to make sure my story is from AJ's pov. There's many more adventures to come and new friends to meet!

which should i read first this one or lavender heart

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Lavender Heart should be read first, since it deals with Twilight Sparkle. Check out Days In the Mind of One that is Great and Powerful (Trixie's POV). My story is from Applejack's POV. There are stories about Lyra Heartstrings, as well as Limestone and Marble Pie, Rainbow Dash, and hopefully, Fluttershy, Rarity, and Pinkie Pie.

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i found the lyra story but i havnt seen anything about the pie sisters

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Apple Frost must have deleted her story, so Pinkie Pie's sisters, Maud, Marble, and Limestone Pie are available.

8293355
Apple Frost is doing her story with Zecora as her main character.

There are plenty of ponies and non-pony characters from the show as well as OC's who can be transformed into anthro ponies.

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