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bluemoon1996


I give folk what they want, nothing more. And that just happens to be poorly thought out Fanfics with bad updating schedules

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In the year 2020, two lifelong friends join a new VRMMORPG designed for bronies. But when it becomes a game of life or death, everything will change. The perils they face are many: monsters, hostile players, and an advanced AI that can warp reality to his whim. How will these two nitwits survive? Because they sure as heck don't know!


Cover Art by Otakuap on Deviantart.

A side fic to Equestria Legends Online by ShadowFlame.

I understand that there are some people who do not like these types of stories or simply dislike anime such as Sword Art Online, and if you don't like this story because of either of those facts, I'm totally fine with that. But please do not leave dislikes for those reasons. If you dislike the story for a separate reason, feel free to point out why. I'm open to all criticism, especially negative criticism.

Check out the other sidefics of Equestria Legends Online
Brothers: A Tale of Two Sons
Tales of a Midnight Dream
Three Sides of the Coin

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 168 )

And now the fun starts. Let's go, idiot brigade!!

5649843 I'm a changeling there is a slight difference

5649864 just sayin' depending on what you believe changelings can be mindless drones or intelligent creatures

This total reminds me of this one anime SAO I really enjoy that anime. Loving the story so far. Also who the fuck puts a Discord ai thats programed to be CHAOTIC. Also im ttping on my phone and the stupid auto and the typing is horrible. Any ways have a good day dude.

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Ask ShadowFlame.... He's the one who wrote the fic

Oh dear God... I just finished watching Sword Art Online, and now this.

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You know im not really an anime fan:ajbemused:

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Lol oh well we all like different things. The anime is good for features a OP protagonist.

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Well, these guys are anything but overpowered XD

Amazing.

Loved it.

Also....LEVEL UP! You are now Hilariously perfect XD

Comment posted by Endlessshadow deleted Feb 21st, 2015

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wait are the creators were wearing the nerve gear if they are then they basically tell the newbies what to do and also their screwed. Also they should of put a monitor to monitor the game and a mic to communicate to the players rather than gojng in XP XD

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No clue, I didn't invent the universe:derpytongue2:

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I wrote the story because I like the verse and it's concept

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I feel like we are texting each other. And yeah I do like the concept of this story.

I am happy that you went the extra mille in going more into the descriptions of how the sensory emergence fells in the vr world, competitive to the original ELO. The humor is starting to be good I am looking forward to more. So fare there are tree OCs' as characters they seem promising, but there I think that a little more exposure for each of them would be necessary to make them more distinguishing in the story, all do I do understand that you want to get into the thick of the story, and skip as quickly with the introduction of discord that every other reeder who nows of ELO. At list this shows promise as a side fic, and I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Good luck:pinkiehappy:

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:rainbowlaugh:


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the extra mille in going more into the descriptions of how the sensory emergence fells in the vr world

What exactly do you mean by that?


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Yep, SAO:pinkiehappy:

Someone must have played or watched Sword Art Online. :rainbowlaugh:

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Nope, not a fan of anime:trollestia:

The whole thing comes from the fic Equestria Legends Online

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Oh, also, Blood for the Blood god!

Thus message brought to you by Chaos Khorne Flakes, the skull shaped breakfast cerial that turns your milk blood red! Part of this balanced heresy.

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My friend who Pheonix is based off and I are huge 40K nerds :twistnerd:

5651173 I'm not as big a 40k nerd as I would like to be. I love the lore, and the art, and have played one of the video games, but I could never afford the tabletop.

My little brother, on the other hand, is just getting into it, and it's all thanks to his girlfriend. She has also gotten him to start watching Star Trek.

I have dutifully informed him that she is a keeper.

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We don't play tabletop but he has both Dawn of wars (my computer cant run jack squat gamewise).
And im too a huge lore nerd.
There was also a second 40k reference of da orky kind:derpytongue2:

And she does sound like a keeper:trollestia:

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Well, to be totally honest. I haven't even finished the fic I based this off of XD

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Yup pretty much agree with u right there because it kinda seems impossible for a Discord AI to some how hack inro the data bases and take out the log out and somehow actually made the nerve gear fry theie brains if taken off. Seriously what moron actually makes him capable to over through the gam designers. Also how is he firing his carbine. How? Plus im usunng my phone for this. Good night

5650919 Well maybe I am exaggerating a little bit on that end, It is just that I like well describe environment and the the general ambiance they put off. Tactile sensations, as well is always good in my opinion as it give an extra sens to work with when imagining what the character is filling. But seeing your other stories, I think you all ready now that,

5652861 I think I might have an explanation for that. You see, Discord can warp reality itself, and that's what the dev team was going for. So he probably doesn't have admin controls, but he's tricking everyone to think that he does. With that log out button missing, it's probably not really. Instead, Discord's probably just tricking everyone in the game that it doesn't exist.

As for killing someone in the game and killing them in real life, it's actually not too hard for him to pull it off. When someone in the game dies, he uses the nervegear's to his advantage. By using the sight sense, he can administer prolonged seizures with the powers that the dev team gave him originally. And by killing the person in reality, their character won't respawn.

He's not telling the truth about exactly what he's doing, but the end result is still the same.

Great chapter! I also really like greycait's writing style. I'm following his story, "Three Foal Wish", and I'm loving it.

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