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MoondustIsPoison


Ground up moonrocks are pure poison.... I am deathly ill -Cave Johnson

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Feb
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2019

Getting back into this · 5:13am Feb 2nd, 2019

After a LOOONG time, I've finally actually made some kind of attempt at writing stuff again, and I'm finally gonna put out a story ive been tinkering with for ages and ive got some decent starts for a couple more, but its good to be back.

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'preciate it my dude :)

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Tbh I like it a lot, the only real complaint I have is how the "scout droids" were portrayed... they seem a bit aggressive for the name. Having a gun and whatnot else as a deterrent makes sense. but the thing tazing someone without any real provocation, then having several of them aggressively persue and shoot at an already retreating party seems a bit out of place. These robots you wrote seem more like some sort of multi role attack robots or maybe hunter/killers.

otherwise awesome story and keep up the good work :)

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anything you like/no like about story?

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Feb
2nd
2019

Getting back into this · 5:13am Feb 2nd, 2019

After a LOOONG time, I've finally actually made some kind of attempt at writing stuff again, and I'm finally gonna put out a story ive been tinkering with for ages and ive got some decent starts for a couple more, but its good to be back.

Report MoondustIsPoison · 94 views ·