Ground up moonrocks are pure poison.... I am deathly ill -Cave Johnson
Pegasus weather control unit 3 or as we call ourselves The Flying Rattlesnakes, is the single group of ponies I And would entrust my life to... And for good reason... Sandstorm wrangling on the southern border of Equestria is a dangerous job... Takes guts...sometimes more literally than anypony would ever want to see...
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The good first.
A very good start and will be adding to my watch list.
And now for the bad.
You have several easily avoided errors. To my untraind eye they are mostly spelling errors that look to be a case of fat finger on small buttons.
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now I have swapped to a Dell keyboard I dug up from somewhere...and it seems to be working fine...so from here on out I'll try to correct my mistakes, instead of senslessly smacking my tablet with my face.