[I decided to try and write a Conversion Bureau fic where the humans and ponies have a relatively even playing field, and with some different ideas thrown in for good measure.
Don't expect the usual for this story, it isnt going to be very similar to anything else.
I stink at grammar so feel free to suggest edits.
Now to the actual description:
When the ponies first arrived on earth, it honestly went pretty well, and soon the world thrived, the ponies and humans made allies and new technology, art and music flooded both worlds, it was amazing. Then something changed, nobody seems to know what, the ponies suddenly turned around and insulted the human race and our accomplishments, and subsequently attacked several cities simultaneously, claiming them as equestrian territory and transforming its citizens into ponies. The ponies demanded that we stand down and let our fate happen, humans being humans, immediately turned around and fought back, the war has been going on for about 3 years now, humans aren't doing so hot, the ponies just keep turning our soldiers into ponies and turning them against us, soon militias formed, gun laws became near non-existent and the crime rates plummeted, I guess world domination is enough motivation to stop violent crimes. I joined the local militia as a pilot and headhunter, I'm not letting these backstabbing bastards take our planet.
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So like ponies helping the humans of what just happen?
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Im not completely sure what you're trying to ask but based on the context im going to assume you asked about why the pony is helping the human out, (please correct me if im wrong)
To answer your question, i'd say that it is completely reasonable for exeptions to occur, not everyone just blindly follows their leader, there's bound to be disagreement, Im not saying that all of them will help.
8051425 Ok
me likey
Why do people diss this story it's better then some movie plots I've seen but you should make your chapters longer.
8263196
Glad you like it!
And Ill try to make the future chapters longer, The only reason these are kinda short is because of the relatively lacking in expirience I had when I first started belting this out, now that ive had a little time to figure things out Ive been gradually making my content longer... So that should be fufilled pretty soon, thus far most of my newer chapters in my other stories are sitting at around 2-3 thousand words rather than barely 1000 so hopefully this one will get the same treatment.
Btw...I congratulate you on actually finding this and daring to read it even with the somewhat disconcerting L/D ratio...
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Well. L/D doesn't effect me as much as other people but having a good L/D is good.
This tcb story is good please keep updating.
8616081
Its been awhile, But I suppose I could, Thanks for finding it!
8616778
Cant wait to read it.😄
nice story, first comment.
8901024
Thanks!
o boy here we go again
9005604
Kinda suprised that someone found this, currently it isnt being updated, and it probably needs a bit of a rework to make a bit more sense and to improve flow. If I ever do update it Ill probably post something on my profile page if anybody cares to know where this goes.
It was the bug ponies all along! They muder this story! Any way it was a good little read will be adding to my track for a hopeful update