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The Toaster


Have you ever tried to indulge an all-consuming urge to kill when you don't have opposable thumbs? Or hands? OR ANYTHING OTHER THAN A BREAD SLOT??

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Leo had just turned 16 and passed high school, he had a life that you can consider as ordinary, but one day he dreamed of a creature, who was better described as outright bizarre and also having a strange and questionable sense of humor, but he just shrugged that aside.

An error on his part, as the creature who named himself as 'Discord' suddenly pulled him into a world he had never seen before and with a body that was similar to his, and what did he mean by himself being an apprentice? What the hell is going on?

And why the people are all look like colorful horses?


The artwork's are not mine! They belong to their respective owners.

The Cover image creator: https://www.deviantart.com/thewonderpuppet

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 33 )

That hybrid would be a pain in the ass

Great new story coming together!
Keep it up!

I feel like the pace was a little too fast. Maybe have some slower dialogue and more detailed descriptions of characters and events.

10454877
Thanks for the tips, will do!

Ok that chapter was good with the way you did it. I am doing a fanfic my self but I have multiple realities of it and don't know which one to choose. But the plot that you are doing here is good as it is. Keep it up!

10513367
Will try! Once school and sickness is out of the way!

10513830
no! This month, my sickness and once i finish some of my homeworks

10514055
cool. wish you luck then. I just posted a story myself so I'm going through the same thing myself... sort of.

I hope this isn't dead already.

10582431
Nah dude, it was more of a joke story, i didn't expect to explode like that, i will work more in this after i have finished my 'God of Anger'

Continue com essa história por favor tá muito legal mesmo eu amei essa história por favor

10667853
Desculpa mano, mas ela ta em hiatus por enquanto, estou focando em outra história, mas relaxa que abandonada ela não está!

Comment posted by Starkiler deleted February 8th

Gonna wait patiently for this one to continue

Why make this anthro?

10753350
Personal reason, I can't write thinking about animals walking on all fours, i imagine them just like normal people, and that would destroy the immersion, so I do anthro to look more natural.

10753369
Yay. finally. It has updated.

Continue com essa história por favor tá muito legal mesmo eu amei essa história por favor

When is the sequel !?

10843850
You guys really like this story huh? my God xD
Dunno, still working on it

GOOD LUCK !!!

This could use 46 more chapters

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