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Mister E-Nonymous


All you need to know about me. I don't start another story until I finish one.

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With his parents dead due to unexpected circumstances, 6-year-old Danny has been sent to live with his aunt and uncle who treat him like a slave than a nephew. His cries of help were answered in an unexpected way. When he was cleaning up the front yard, a mysterious wormhole opened up, and he got sucked in. When he woke up, he saw he was in a colorful world, and he wasn't human anymore, but a young pegasus colt, on a cloud about 200 feet from the ground. Luckily, he was helped by a rainbow maned pegasus.

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Comments ( 98 )

Great chapter!

Are there going to be references to “The Mysterious Mare Do Well”?

I'll call that wormhole 'The Big Succ'

*Before reading the story* Um... You sure you don't mean 'Harry' as in Harry Potter?

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No. Plus, there are people who who like Harry Potter, and there are people who don't, and I am on the don't list.

I wonder if the police in danny's old world say got evidence of how danny's uncle and aunt have treated him cause i hope for karma will strike

Another great chapter!

Did Danny told the CMC about his aunt and uncle while riding with them?

Was Mrs. Cake’s first name ever said in the show?

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1.) Yes.

2.)No, I looked it up. Plus, Mrs. Cake went by another name when before she was married. You could see in "The Perfect Pear."

I hope that Danny’s aunt and uncle don’t find a way to Equestria.

I hope Celestia, Luna, and even Cadance can help Danny regain all his happy memories of his parents and through Luna's magic all the happy memories his parents have of him that includes him in their life just to see how much they loved Danny as much as he loved his parents

I'm not really bothered by the technical issues with the writing, but I really keep getting pulled out of the story when Danny is just too mature for a six year old. it might be a bit more believable if he was at least 10 or 12.

Great chapter!

I’m guessing King Sombra’s is going to bring Reginald and Natasha to Equestria once he appears.

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Does the entire story take place in the second season only?

"Good... night... Mom..."

:twilightsmile:

I still hope that Danny’s aunt and uncle don’t get to Equestria. They didn’t deserve to have Danny with them.:flutterrage:

If his aunt and uncle do come they should hang from a tall oak tree

Yeah... that plan's about as likely to work as rolling a ball of molasses uphill.

Will Rainbow Dash and the CMC side with Danny for the things that he’s being “blamed” for while Everypony else is against him?

Great chapter!

Is Nightmare Moon’s plan require the Use of the Elements?

Did you planned for this chapter to be made with all that is going on in the world right now?

Stay safe!

Great chapter!

It seems that the Mane 6 and the Princesses will be taking a trip to Earth!

Poor Danny I hope they can get him back before it's too late

Another great chapter!

Is Solaris going to use his magic to turn the Mane 6 into humans?

I bet those two won't last in prison because the second the inmates find out they won't survive.

Loved it , but don’t bring back those two beasts. At least not for a long time.

I sorry, I enjoyed this chapter, but mostly because it got trial proceedings SO wrong. Some real alternative universe stuff going on here.
Trial date set less than a week from arrest? Real world it would more likely be 18 months.
Discovery? (legal term for gathering evidence, unlike tv trials, laywers from both sides get to study evidence, challenge it's truthfulness and require documention of how it was gathered months before the trial. ) much of the technical parts of a real trial is back and forth between the lawyers about what can and can not be admitted. No such thing as a Surprise witness or Suddenly found evidence in real trials. Really important, fact changing evidence discovered after a trial starts would still not be allowed, rather if the judge was convinced the evidence was really critical, he would stop the current trial and set a new date months in the future for a new trial. not good tv, perhaps but trials are not for show.

Trials are all about jury selection, challenges of what evidence can be presented and procedural rules.

Great chapter and great story!

The End

Or is it?

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I'm actually thinking of making a sequel for this one. But it's another human adopted by a pony in the same universe. This time, it would be a human adopted by Pinkie Pie.

Is this a Danny Phantom crossover? Also, why isn't this marked as complete?

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Oh, no crossover. And also, I forgot. I'll get right on it.

I loved the story (hated the aunt and uncle) hoping to see a sequel

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Guess what? I'm just starting a sequel, but it's in the teen rating, but there's something unexpected that's about to happen.

I was going to fall and die as a small horse. I was hanging onto for dear life, and I was going to die soon. Nobody was around to help me. I wasn't going to live my life anymore. If things weren't bad enough, the lightning bolt destroyed the last part of the cloud, and I fell, screaming. This was it for me.

"C'mon, kid," I told him. "Your parents must be really worried about you."

"But where are we going to hold the party?" I asked her.

I looked up the stairs, but then I smiled and said,

I was confused at that and looked towards Rainbow Dash and asked, "What's a Cutie Mark?"

"Well, according to Scootaloo," said Sweetie Belle, "pegasi magic allows them to fly and... something else. What was it?"

Keep on trying with your pointless quest

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Mrs. Cake’s first name was said when the the twins were born.

I've had apples back home, but they weren't as good as this."

"Alright, Danny," said Rainbow Dash. "How about I take you back to my place after this party is all over? Let's get you some good eats."

I’m surprised Scootaloo wasn’t jealous! :rainbowkiss:

I held him tighter and said, "That will never happen. I won't let anything like that happen to you." I could feel tears coming onto my chest. I then asked, "Is something else wrong?"

I really like this version of Rainbow Dash!

He needed this. So, I let him have it.

"I'm fine," Danny said. "Guess I forgot I'm not human anymore."

"Thought we should eat out this morning," said Twilight.

"Good morning, Miss Cheerilee," said the other fillies and colts.

We looked towards the two fillies walking up to us.

"Good night, Danny."

I was about to walk out the room until I heard him mumble something in his sleep. "Good... night... Mom..."

Reminds me of the “I love you” scene from my little Dashie.
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