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The Abyss


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:pinkiegasp:


*adds to favorites*

7403246 :pinkiegasp:You dirty prick.


JK

Stunning, captured the love between Dashie and Soarin perfectly, this is going in my favorites for sure!

Contains: Estrus, Slight Cum Inflation, and Impregnation

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This was a very well written story.

so awesome I love, is there any chance of a sequel. I hope so:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::twilightsmile::pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

7403246 Well, just because you didn't find this one alluring, don't let that stop you from reading other clopfics. There are a lot of great stories out there that have clop in them, so maybe give them a chance?

7403394 There's always a chance of me writing a sequel if enough people like it.

Contains: Estrus, Slight Cum Inflation, and Impregnation

Yessssss! :rainbowwild:

I know what I'll be reading tonight!

7403417 Haha, I made sure to write a good bit about the cum inflation for ya, puss.

7403420
Looks like you did it sparingly too, which is even better. Will read and review tonight. :ajsmug:

Up voted and added to my bookshelf. I got nothing more to say other then bravo! So I wonder who else got married among the mane 6 and if they have foals yet?

Damnit, you just covered three of my favourite fetishes and one of my favourite ships? Can you read my mind, Abyss?

7403440 We'll have to see, won't we? I might just have to make a series of the mane six with their special someponies.

7403433 Hence the reason why I said "Slight cum inflation" in the description. It's not over the top or anything like that, but it's just enough to be considered cum inflation. And sounds good! Can't wait. :heart:

7403442 Haha, nah. I just felt like I wanted to write a romantic little clopfic between two of my favorite pones, and what else shows that you love someone more than agreeing to have a foal together?

7403329 Thanks! That's what I really wanted to focus on with this story.

I was tempted to upvote this just from the contains list, then I got the best romantic clop I've read in forever. That's a favourite.

nice story. sequel?

7403677 Thanks, but it keeps going in and out of the bottom of the box. XP

7403580 If it does well enough, I don't see why not! There's already a picture of Soarin's and Rainbow's foals, found here: https://derpiboo.ru/1109744?scope=scpe20cfd47395cb64cc5d4c1c1b80dd9c426d84362d

Edit: Or this one here! http://colorstirke.deviantart.com/art/Daddy-s-Little-Wonderbolt-595020561

Let's see. Incredibly detailed sex between two lovers (who happen to be Soarin' and Rainbow Dash, one of my favorite pairings), complete with a well-developed relationship between them, a mare in heat being satisfied, slight cum-flation, and willing, WANTED impregnation. I love the attention to them taking every method possible to get her preggers after sex. That always is quite a nice detail to me.


You have more than earned your like and fave.


My only desire would be that this could have been extended a little more somehow. As it is, it is a nice little compact package however.

Damn this made me hard XD :rainbowkiss:

7403411 sequal!!!! I LOVED this!!!!!!

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God damn it Abyss.

7404426 I know you loved this.

7403246 You'll find another in time. We all do.

7403246 Fancy seeing you here:raritywink:

You'll be back:rainbowlaugh:

Damn best romantic soardash clopfic I've read in a long time! faved and upvoted

Liked and faved. :ajsmug: was really loving and sweet and the cum inflation was nice, but I think you could have stretched that part out a little more. Like show a little more of how rainbow liked it or add a few more details about the filling part. Other then that it wasn't overboard like a lot of stories like this are and I enjoyed it. A+

y'know what was the worst part of this? IT HAD TO END! i wanted more:fluttercry:

romantic clopfic is best clopfic

Why is Rainbow OOC?

7407188 What makes you think that she's out of character?

yep you need and we need more soarinDash in our lives! so a follow up/extended story is a must!

7403687
So has it done well enough?

Fucking awesome! (Literally):pinkiehappy:

Short, but sweet. And with this quality writing, there's no wonder it got featured. Grats :twilightsmile:

Not many stories make me go da'w and give me a boner at the same time but this one did both.

I really dislike Rainbow, but Soarin is cool. How about a sequel (clop or not, don't mind) where Rainbow is pregnant and dealing with all that? Soarin could even have some pregnancy sex with her to make it clop-tastic and help her raging hormones.

I love you for this Abyss! My desired fetish in this chapter!:rainbowkiss:

Impregnation.:heart:

7409034 Haha, the look on Soarin's face is priceless. XP

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