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RandomHumanBeging4112


Super shipper, writer, and artist(formerly known as Indigo Dawn1234

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After a long day at school, Rainbow Dash decides to head to the local park to blow off some steam on the small soccer field. She runs into her enemy, Soarin Skies, the only person to beat her at soccer. They end up in a one-on-one game against each other. But near the end of the game, Rainbow injures herself and it's up to Soarin to help her get to where she needs to go. Just meant to be a cute mini-SoarinDash story.

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Comments ( 12 )

"Pinkie you bitch!!!" Ahum...great work do.

Welp.. Apart from everyone being massively out of character for such a petty friggin reason...uh... hmm...

I got nothing nice to say. *shrugs*

This seems like it could be improved with some situational development, maybe a prequel explaining the OOC behavior. The chemistry between Dash and Soarin was well done though. One real issue though is that 911 calls are free, including on payphones. By law, all service providers have to make emergency calls available, even Cell phones that have no active service plan will connect a 911 call. Other than that, a nice effort.

7800145 Well, then don't say anything.

7800848 Thank you for letting me know that

GOD I'M DAWWING SO HARD AT THE END!!!:rainbowlaugh:

Dawww, this was an adorable story! :twilightsmile: I really enjoyed it.

WOW PINKIE i know that you have that break off BUT SHE BROKE HER ANKLE FOR CELESTIA'S SAKE, look who's the inconsiderate one now

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