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Crysis Commander

You do you the best you can do.

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I must say, this is some of your best work yet! I'm really glad to see it posted, the wait was worth it.

I'll just count this as a week early B-Day present for myself~ :heart:

suprisingly well written fic, I expect to see it featured fairly soon. Five mustaches to you good sir/madam! :moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :moustache:

What does BJs stand for?


why didn't you tag the best part in the story description?

It was such a brief part, I didn't think anyone would consider it worth tagging. I can definitely fix that :twilightsmile:


Snuggles? Really? You disgusting deviant. There's a limit to how much perversion you can fit into ONE story, and this takes the cake!

Wow. Not the biggest fan of anal, but, still.....damn.

It's pretty narly I know, but hopefully nobody has died, yet.

Really glad you liked it! Twilestia is a nice pairing to work with, and this turned out much better than I expected. It's comments like this that make me think that I shouldnt let this be my only clopfic. :rainbowkiss:

Thanks a lot! I'm glad you saw it as something decently put together. It reminds me that I actually did okay with this! :pinkiehappy:

7236360 I told you it'd be featured~ your story was very well written and deserves its time in the featured slot <3

That was a really well written story. Very, very, sweet and just as erotic. Liked.

this was an awesome story, I loved seeing both twilight and celestia taking it in the ass. my ultimate princess story would be all four princesses lined up one behind the other doing that. although with four of them I imagine that would be quite difficult to do

's good. I rate it 7/10 faps

Only disappointment was that they just dozed off when Twilight got a creampie

Comment posted by mastermenthe deleted May 22nd, 2016

7237135 Megapone writes shit and toddler porn. No one should be mistaken for him.

Pardon my ignorance but aren't anatomically-correct genitals and futa mutually exclusive?

7237327 Even if the genitals are on a female body they can still be anatomically correct.

Hey that was pretty good!

Also, always nice to see (mostly) proper procedure for anal play. Remember kids: when you're trying butt-stuff, more lube is always better, NEVER do it without real lube (spit DOESN'T COUNT), and if it EVER hurts STOP, try more lube/a different position/or something smaller. Some discomfort is normal, especially at first, genuine pain is BAD. Horny people trying too hard to make butt-fun work in a way they shouldn't ends up in a hilariously large number of sad and embarrassing emergency room visits every year.

To be honest, I didn't know if it'd actually get this far. I won't complain that it got there, though!

Glad you liked it! Yeah, better to be closer to how things go down and not have anyone try to imitate something dangerous for both parties. :twilightsmile:

Very well written

Planning on doing a sequel with Candence and Shining Armor?

Hello again! It has come to my attention that an image that is incredibly similar to a part in this story was created today of all days.


And for the record: My headcannon is this is fanart.

Wow, that is pretty similar! Thanks for sharing that obviously NSFW but not directly linked image. Now, I would say it's a coincidence, but given the position, the actions, and whatnot, I'm less inclined to believe it was a random thing.


Never thought about it, but it'll definitely be considered. :raritywink:

7239019 when someone sucks their own dick.

This was a clever attempt to lull people into a false sense of security; a way to turn straight people bisexual! The brief mentions of their pussies were to weaken their guard, to keep them reading this homosexual agenda while you subtly pulled a bait and switch by having purely gay acts with absolutely zero description on how their pussies felt, or any interest in them at all besides said brief acknowledgments. They may as well have been two stallions fucking each other! I'm onto you! :flutterrage:

I'm obviously being facetious. This was actually pretty neat , even if I personally couldn't get off to it. Kudos to you.

Thanks! As someone who likes your work, that means a lot! :pinkiehappy:

I liked how it ended, but now I want a sequel because of it lol

When you can go to Google and type 'define autofelliato' in less than 10 seconds but decide to ask someone else what it means when it may take them more than an hour to reply.
Seriously, you are using the Internet to browse this site right now.
For some reason it really bothers me...

Though she already knew her answer, Celestia pondered, eliciting a groan from Twilight from her mock contemplation. Once her decision had been physically affirmed, she winked and motioned inside. “Come inside.”


Hit the nail on the head, buddy. :raritywink:

Seriously though, liked, favorited, followed, came, created a monument in my closet dedicated to your name, etc.

That would probably be the first monument to myself that anyone has made. Not that I'm complaining. :rainbowlaugh:

Why is this the only story that I've read that features shower sex? I really like that this story focused on butts and pleasuring them in every way possible, so this automatically gets a like and a favorite from me!

Comment posted by 2Merr deleted May 24th, 2016

7242074 That comment and profile pic (minus the word hugs) fits way too well.

I'm not normally a fan of Twilight/Celestia shipping, but damn Crysis, this story is hot; not to mention a very interesting take on alicorn ascensions.

I love how you included Twilight doubting the situation a few times, making it seem more realistic and I think it really fits with Twilight's canon personality. Celestia's reassurances and kind words, fitting with her canon personality as well.

Good show Crysis Commander, this story is absolutely worth a favorite and I will definitely check out your other stories.

That was hot. Any chance of a sequel?

A direct sequel? Not really sure. An indirect sequel with Cadence and Shining Armor? More than likely. :pinkiehappy:

Ooooh, and what about one after that with all of them.

Glad you found it worth a like even with the Twilestia ship! :pinkiehappy:

Hopefully I'm able to pull off that kind of canon-ish characterization with future stories like this. A little disclaimer about my other stories, though: I haven't done much re-writing (or any in most cases) of my older fics, and some (the first one, mostly) are nowhere near this level. Hopefully that isn't too much of a deterrent. I'll definitely be writing more to put the sub-par ones of my past further back on this list. :twilightsmile:

I'm also not too sure why it isn't utilized more. It's a great place for intimate stuff to happen, so why more writers don't use it is beyond me.

Butts are the best part! Why not show them the love they deserve? :scootangel:

7244313 Completely agree! We need more fillies on stallions rimming action!

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