• Member Since 10th Jun, 2013
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RarityEQM


Just a pony being fabulous. Writer of vignettes, clop, experiments, a great deal of trash and the occasional gem

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It's about time some gloriously gigantic girlcocks happened. Good show!
~TOOWC

I have no words... Because I haven't read it yet.

~ Neon Lights

I love TwiLestia! :twilightsmile: Tracking this one.

So I'm glad I'm able to like futa stories so I can enjoy reading this story. XD
(I wouldn't read it a couple of years ago, lol)

Also, it's pony, and not anthro, which is great, since I prefer pony.

By the way, I hope futa Rarity will be written at some point, too :raritywink:

So does the incomplete tag mean we're going to see more of this or is it just a one shot? Either way, very well done.

Not bad, but could have used an editing pass for grammar.

The build up was good, but the culmination actually felt, ironically, anti-climactic. A little more detail and a little more feeling would have given it a great deal more impact after that teasing build up.

I hope that the incomplete status means we'll be getting more of this, especially something with Celestia showing her how it's done IYKWIM :raritywink:.

6297542 Yes, darling. Writing stories at 4 am, due to days on end of no sleep does have a way destroying one's grammar. And sense of reality. And...time.

I shall get to it, when I can get to it :)

Unless you want to help. I shant turn away an offer

Wow that was a very good job for your first futa story, and yes I agree they are hard to come up with.

And you where working on it at 4:00 in the morning and while we where chatting a bit wow that's amazing your a very impressive person (if you don't mind me saying that of course :twilightblush:)

And if you'd like I would like to do my best to help you out in anyway I can

Nice. Very nice. :pinkiehappy:

Molestia strikes again.

Fusion Fool imminent in 3...2...

This was just wonderful. I wish there was more X3

Very nice, Lady Rarity *bows*. I also don't dislike futa stories, but I thought 'Her Ladyship wouldn't steer me wrong', so I read and thoroughly enjoyed. Can't wait for more

I don't know whether to thank or shun your 100th follower.

that was very well done, a lovely little snippet of Twilestia

I really hope you continue this.

Who did the cover art? Went to source, got a different picture.

Pretty good, though the ending was a bit anticlimactic. I kind of expected it to go on longer with that kind of build up.

But overall, it was not bad at all. Hopefully there'll be more.

So, there will be more then?


that abrupt ending tho

far more intense that Celestia expected

pretty sure you meant 'than' instead of 'that'.

otherwise good teasing futa fic.

Your cover art source is broken

Twilight didn't like Celestia taking charge.

She loved it.

I would think Twilight would hate it on a casual level. However it's that hate that makes her so excited and horny for more. She would be absolutely desperate for Celestia to release her and be terrified at being so incredibly dependent and helpless.
It's the same sort of excitement people feel when skydiving. You are terrified of it and that's what makes it fun.

The story is really hot. Remove the line about Twilight loving it and it'll be perfect.

"Only when I let you."

Strange to say that and then have Twilight cum in the very next paragraph.

Decent work, Rares.
~Yr. Pal, B

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