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RoyalBardofCanterlot
Celestia and Luna's royal bard. Nature is my God, Art is my religion, Love is the Law. Concordia Invictus
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This was very sweet. Also loved the 'bellyrubs' reference...
This was actually kinda heart-warming. Could use some work on a couple of typos, and you totally need a new avatar image, but I liked the story.
6164825 Thanks for the review. I couldn't find a Safe-for-work cover for this story.
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I meant your actual avatar.
<-- That thing. Maybe pick up something more iconic than ponycreator. Unique, so people can recognize you at a glance. Part of getting recognition. You deserve some more attention, with stories like this.
I enjoyed this. Helped brighten up my rather dreary world. Definitely putting this diamond in the rough up on my bookshelf.
On a serious note though, how is this sitting on 34-3? That would mean maybe a few hundred views tops, barely any exposure at all. You honestly deserve much better.
" forearms"
I've been looking for something like this for my "clop library" for quite some time.
This right here... this was truly wonderful...
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too
Not the hickory switch! I hate that fucker!!
I like this, have a fave!
Best part ever.
that explain everything.
it's kinda sad we don't really have a story where twilight is mother to the two royal sisters
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I've considered writing a story where Twilight and Fluttershy are summoned back in time by Clover to Clever in order to help raise the foals Luna and Tia, who are out of control and can only be effectively disciplined by another alicorn. (or a well-applied Stare)
Holy crap this story is great cant wait for more.
good but it could use some refinement. Try making this part longer without adding content and less precise.
Why would she be so open about it? You would expect her to be more hesitant to admit to something like that.
Try to be less exact.
being in that situation I would think a lot of memories would resurface for Twilight.
at home having more fun than i am?
her dad is god? and that would be mildly disturbing. could it not be her mom? dont forget that god is some omnipotent being that does not have a gender.
late for class that's a spankin forgot your HOMEWORK that's A PADDALIN having the best orgasam of your life PRICELESS
You shouldn't do that. Go all out, make Twilight give Tia a spanking and then do the hugging scene after that. Celestia wants Twilight to dominate her so Twilight also should do that.
bananas
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homework
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I'm thinking Twilight could use a good cucumber right about now ^_^.
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Well this spin off from Belly Rub sure is ininteresting .
From here on down needs indentations.
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You forget in a world of physical deities. Like every Alicorn ever, and Discord. Deities have gender, so her dad would be God if not a God. That simply decided to say "Buck it! You mortals are on your own, and Tia no sending your sister to a sororicidal rampage. You know how she gets when you steal the last cookie from the cookie jar." Then left.
With their mom having left ages ago because the Heavenly Planes have the best spas, and she decided to take a Spa Eon (like a spa day, but lasting a billion years.).
This entire chapter needs to be indented.
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that'd be a little hard with their new size differences ^_^.
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I'm actually glad this was an age spell version of this fetish. Tia as a full grown alicorn doing this would be too weird.
TwiLestia
7841365 Between the two, which do you prefer?
7841417 if you meant between TwiLuna, or TwiLesta... TwiLestia... by faaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar
7841516 Heh, that was unclear. I meant between the new version of chapters 4-5 or the old version.
7841532 oh x'D, the new versions
Long live the hairbrush!
I quite like that, while Celestia hasn't completely forgiven herself, she is making steps in the right direction. It's not as though a switch can be flipped, but rather a gradual process, and you've portrayed that well.
Also, affirmation of trust through the safeword was very nice to read. It's a part of BDSM that is too often overlooked with stories like this.
Gése. Hit biþ. (Yes. It is.)
Early Modern English is still a bit tricky too, though.
Is this leading to celestia getting another spanking. I love the idea I just was not sure where you were leading it.
8208744 This story is now complete. If Celestia gets another spanking, it will be in another story. Thanks for reading.
this was a lovely story and im very glad that u continued it after its long hiatus
Often you are a little too specific about the spankings being arousing. You don't have to mention that their vulva is getting wet. Just say that she feels a sensual pleasure. Keep the focus on the spanking itself on not on their arousal.
So far- Very great!
Aww that was so cute! Very well done!
I feel like being a troll today!
Don't stand in front of her throne, Twilight! Don't do it!
The words you are looking for are “much less” instead of nonetheless.
Just a nitpick