I've considered writing a story where Twilight and Fluttershy are summoned back in time by Clover to Clever in order to help raise the foals Luna and Tia, who are out of control and can only be effectively disciplined by another alicorn. (or a well-applied Stare)
"No, of course not!" Twilight said. She swept Tia up into a hug.
You shouldn't do that. Go all out, make Twilight give Tia a spanking and then do the hugging scene after that. Celestia wants Twilight to dominate her so Twilight also should do that.
Celestia knew the signs of her student having an existential crisis. She stroked her mane. "Look, I have you, my guards, my sister, my allies. I think I have plenty of ponies willing to fight for me. I'm simply not that easy to get to, nonetheless kill. I promise I'm not going anywhere."
The words you are looking for are “much less” instead of nonetheless.
that explain everything.
it's kinda sad we don't really have a story where twilight is mother to the two royal sisters
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I've considered writing a story where Twilight and Fluttershy are summoned back in time by Clover to Clever in order to help raise the foals Luna and Tia, who are out of control and can only be effectively disciplined by another alicorn. (or a well-applied Stare)
You shouldn't do that. Go all out, make Twilight give Tia a spanking and then do the hugging scene after that. Celestia wants Twilight to dominate her so Twilight also should do that.
This entire chapter needs to be indented.
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that'd be a little hard with their new size differences ^_^.
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I'm actually glad this was an age spell version of this fetish. Tia as a full grown alicorn doing this would be too weird.
Aww that was so cute! Very well done!
The words you are looking for are “much less” instead of nonetheless.
Just a nitpick