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SeaPonysTears


I fell face first into MLP in 2012, and am now (im)patiently waiting for Season 5!

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Twilight Sparkle has been assigned to supervise the preparations for the Summer Sun Celebration. Simple enough, aside from the fact that eternal night may be looming over Equestria...and oh, yeah. She's in love with Princess Celestia.

Thanks goes to OnyxTheGryphon for editing.

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Comments ( 16 )

I enjoyed this. But I would very much like to see a sequel to this, one with closure, a bit happier ending. More lovey-dovey crap. Otherwise, good job.

Nicely done. I think this is really the first story I have seen talking about how she would have felt the night before she arrived in Ponyville. Could have been a little longer but I think the shortness was part of the niceness of it. Worth a definite upvote.

Celestia's response:

Very nice story. Could use a good going over for comma use and a few other grammar issues to make it a smoother read, but good nonetheless.

It was alright, my friend. I demand a clop sequel!

Comment posted by Aryame deleted Jun 26th, 2014

I was expecting at the end to say something like "That you can smile, and move on." :twilightblush:

As always with something that's Twilestia... I demand a sequel.

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Comment posted by SeaPonysTears deleted Jun 26th, 2014

You good sir and/or madam, are an artist of words, a magnificent poet. Great job and wonderful read! :twilightsmile:

4601984 Thank you ^_^ No worries, I'm a girl actually. :heart:

So I take it that Twilight Sparkle's reaction to being told to stay in Ponyville will be

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