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Crysis Commander

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Crysis Commander Joined 11th Mar, 2012 · Offline

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Silver Inkwell
Silver Inkwell #2 · Nov 25th, 2017 · · ·
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I like this story, simple, short, good.
Thanks for making me smile after I read a bad story

Sharp77
Sharp77 #4 · Nov 25th, 2017 · · ·
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Oh god...NOT ROMANCE-Y STUFF! ANYTHING BUT THAT!

Yggra21
Yggra21 #5 · Nov 26th, 2017 · · ·
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8572300
The Horror, the Horror!

Also, to the author, excellent story. Especially loved Spike’s personality.

Sharp77
Sharp77 #6 · Nov 26th, 2017 · · ·
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8572358
I concur, it was Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious.

thunderhoof716
thunderhoof716 #7 · Nov 26th, 2017 · · ·
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Huh there's a ghost. Anyways, nice story.

meerkat8472
meerkat8472 #8 · Nov 26th, 2017 · · ·
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Wow, they had a great time, and Twilight hasn't even (technically) taken Dashie's virginity yet!

Also, sounds like Sweetie Belle is also going to have a great time. I mean, his tongue must be what, a metre long?

darkwalker787
darkwalker787 #9 · Nov 26th, 2017 · · ·
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Short sweet and str8 to the point.

Stormgnome
Stormgnome #10 · Nov 26th, 2017 · · ·
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This was nice.

A futa story that doesn't go overboard and keeps things romantic are somewhat rare.

pahnazd
pahnazd #11 · Nov 27th, 2017 · · ·
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That was actually surprisingly sweet. Well done! :twilightsmile:

Also, adorable Dashie is adorable.

J_Steelwing
J_Steelwing #12 · Nov 29th, 2017 · · ·
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Now this, this is what I came here to read. I loved this so much, ticking all my boxes.

Jim Hard
Jim Hard #13 · Nov 11th, 2018 · · ·
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“Look at me when I cum in your tight throat, Dashie.”

Sick Elzzombie reference. I just think it's sad that I could pick it out by memory.

Uniconwizard
Uniconwizard #15 · Mar 10th, 2020 · · ·
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Twilight’s eyes shot open. Releasing Rainbow from her grip, she pulled away, raising her hands. “Ah! Okay, okay, I stopped. Sorry, Rainbow.” Her brow raised in concern at the lack of response. As much as she wanted to reach out and comfort her friend, she kept herself at a distance to not make things potentially worse. “Is everything okay? Talk to me.”

HOLY [expletive] YOU GET IT!

Greenstaroftheplane
Greenstaroftheplane #16 · Apr 7th, 2020 · · ·
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“If this becomes a regular thing, I just might do that,” Twilight said before plunging back between Dash’s cheeks. Her tongue traced soft, teasing circles around the outside, studying the involuntary spasms. Shifting her focus to the center, she pressed against it until she could just barely enter. It was certainly tighter than the previous hole she licked, but the thought of fitting her cock in this one created much more excitement.

Reminds me of how nemises wanted the cheeks of that one agent I forgot the name of

JSAR1562
JSAR1562 #17 · Sep 9th, 2021 · · ·
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That was hot. And I adored that it had both perspectives from the top and the sub. I'm a switch so both felt hot and familiar well done. Adding to my "smut to revisit when masturbating" list.

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