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Crysis Commander


You do you the best you can do.

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This story is a sequel to Stay the Night


When Vinyl's headphones break, it doesn't mean much to Octavia, but to Vinyl, it means so much more. Since she moved in with her new marefriend, Vinyl hadn't gone a day without listening to music for hours on end.

Now, without her precious music and Octavia out of the house, the memories of him creep their way to the front of her mind, ready to serenade her with a different, chilling tune.

(Inspired by "Car Radio" by twenty one pilots)
(Artwork made by Leelah-sama on deviantArt)

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Comments ( 13 )

Wow. Her dream was intense. However, I think she took a big step towards recovery and moving on.

Yet again, you have written a golden fic!

Seriously, I can't wait to see if there's going to be a part 3~ :rainbowkiss:

Holy crud! That is some trauma Vinyl has to deal with! Still, she proves herself quite an iron hard soul in how she eventually handled it, and now she has Octavia to help her out.

Good continuation of the story!

that was intense.... woah

that was SO GOOD!!!! :pinkiesad2: :pinkiehappy:

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Glad you liked this and Stay the Night. It means a lot. :twilightsmile:

This was amazing... That's all I'm saying, you don't know how much I loved this story.

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Glad to hear you liked it! :twilightsmile:

I'm just trying to figure out what in the hell is wrong with vinyl. Seriously, that sort of thing doesn't just happen. Black-outs, vivid auditory and visual hallucinations. I cant put my figure on it. If it is an actual thing, Will you please tell me?

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It was pointing towards some somewhat severe PTSD. Though I don't have it, myself, those that suffer from it (most of the time from combat veterans) have similar symptoms.

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yah, I thought of that, but that still doesn't work for all of it. Some of the stuff, even with severe PTSD still doesn't make sense.

BTW. I forgot to say in the first place; really big fan of the story itself. Well typed dood.

That was intense.
Gripping read though.

So far, this story is reminding me of this

Yep. This story was obviously inspired by this scene.

Wow. That was brutal honesty with the PTSD there. Very very well done. The vivid hallucinations are the worst.

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