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Crysis Commander

You do you the best you can do.



With another night of drinks comes another visit to Octavia's house for Vinyl. The reasons for both are as they have been for the past while.

Despite the somewhat recent bad blood between the two, Octavia can't see somepony once dear to her suffer.

The trouble is, can she truly speak to one who is unwilling to listen?

Brought upon by "Stay the Night" by Zedd

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Comments ( 22 )

I love this story for several reasons. One, I've been in Octavias shoes/position before, Two I love the feel of this story at one point I felt something for Vinyl (The Feels has been hit) and my third reason the ship. I like the Vinyl x Octavia ship, its not my favorite but I like it. Oh Yeah! Love the detail by the way.

Really glad you liked it!


:D I hope you write more stories like this and thanks for the Pinkie Face.

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ooooh, look at meeee, I'm upvoting ScratchTavia, ooooh :B

Fixed. Wouldn't want people to get the wrong idea :rainbowlaugh:

Short and phenomenal, you succeeded where I failed. I envy you greatly now.


Thanks a bunch! :twilightsmile:

Glad you liked it.

Damn Crysis, here I am, reading another one of your fics, and here I am, impressed by another one of your fics.
This one isn't clop, but that means nothing regarding it's quality. Cute ship, emotional, believable heart-to-heart conversation, it's just...great.
Nicely done, again.

Thank you very much! With this and Princess Problem being pretty well liked, maybe I should delve more into romance fics.

Well, they ARE about 80% of what I read these days. Otherwise it's cute 5,000 word slice-of-lifes.
But hey, write what you want to write. You're obviously good at it.


That really means a lot, man. Thank you. :pinkiesmile:

Wow. This is a different view of Vinyl and Octavia. Have a fav.:pinkiehappy:


Thanks! Glad to hear you liked it.

that was awesome! I wonder who he is.... :applejackunsure:

When you've read the sequel first :derpytongue2: An amazing story too, I'm not too surprised that it has zero dislikes. But who is he that evi stallion...

An excellent little story

I did a reading of your story! Youtube Reading

I'm at mostly a total loss for words. Thank you so much! The reading is spectacular :pinkiehappy:

domestic violence, you can live without it

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