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Vanilla Mocha


I enjoy ponies. I enjoy coffee. I enjoy writing. So therefore, this pegasister enjoys FimFiction.

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Like the title says, Pinkie Pie tries to get Twilight Sparkle to eat a quesadilla. With the help of Rainbow Dash and her cousin, of course.

I attempted comedy once more, my fellow bronies and pegasisters. Hopefully it won't be too cheesy. No pun intended.

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Comments ( 62 )

HAHAHAH! I LOVE IT!

677234 Yw

WAIT WHOS COMMENT?!?!!?

6772352 Well I deleted a number and it liked a random persons comment

6772410 :rainbowlaugh: I'm surprised they approved it the first time.

:rainbowlaugh::yay:I even watched some of Mary Poppins earlier on :derpyderp2:

6772439 Lol my sister was watching it when I was writing this story. I was in another room, but I heard everything! :rainbowlaugh:

For some reason, the first thing that came to my mind was Mary Poppins. So I guess now we know how Mary Poppins connects to quesadillas.

This is fantastic .

6773182 Yay! :pinkiehappy: It's in the popular stories!

6773182 Thanks for showing me!

Cute. I like that you made Discord the fan fiction writer, can never have too much of him. :rainbowlaugh: I have one grammar correction that I noticed: you might want to add in some kind of scene break after Pinkie leaves to summon Lolly, it's a tad confusing, unless they're in SugarCube Corner, and I just missed that.

Rush and Pony on!
T4E

6773576 Thanks! And I'll be sure to edit it to make it clearer. :pinkiehappy:

So much randomness. The Mary Discord Poppins reference. Couldn't couldn't contain myself. :derpytongue2: As much as I would like this to be a two parter, I guess the sudden end of the narration brings some closure to the story

6774822 I honestly had no idea how to end the story :twilightsheepish: Anyways, glad you enjoyed!

Stars and sapphires... that was... special... :rainbowlaugh:

6775146 Lol glad you enjoyed! :rainbowlaugh:

A bit random and crazy with a hint of lemon. Despite the odd ending, it seems to work nicely for a story about Twilight's phobia.

6775241 Thanks! Glad you liked it! And lol I didn't know how to end it, so I thought, why not?

Noooo!!!!!! Bu-But Ah wanna see what happuns. :fluttershysad:

Still... FUN STORY! Yeehaw!

6775329 :rainbowlaugh: I might consider a sequel. Anyways, glad you liked! ^^

Love this!! Make another!!!!!:pinkiesmile:

Glad Rosie showed it to me.(redroseheat)

6775496 I might :raritywink:

6775511 Me too ^^ I'm also glad you both enjoyed it

So did she eat a quesadilla?

6775695 :pinkiecrazy: Not even I know.

There might be a sequel... Maybe.

You know, just today there was a discussion over in the Writer's Group about Twilight and quesadillas. Well, it started out about avcados, but one thing leads to another. . . .

This was hilarious :trollestia:

*Giggle-snorts*

"Don't worry, Twilight Sparkle," Lolly Poppins said, "A spoonful of sugar helps the quesadillas go down!"
"Wait, what?" The alicorn asked.
"A spoonful of sugar helps the quesadilla go down, helps the quesadilla go down, helps the quesadilla go down!~" Lolly sang.
"Nooooooo! Stop! Stop, stop, stop!" Twilight screamed.

:rainbowlaugh: I lost it right about here. It's really fitting that Pinkie is cousins with Mary Poppins/Lolly Poppins. It explains a lot. :derpytongue2:

6779187 :rainbowlaugh: Thanks! And I'm glad you liked it ^^

Ha ha! that was a good story. Wasn't expecting Discord to be there, but yeah. Seriously though, those are delicious, can't believe she wouldn't be up for experimenting on it :applejackunsure:.

6788541 Thanks! Glad you enjoyed. And yup, they are really good!

wow didant realize this was one of yours miss mocca loved it so funny and haha discord writing a fanfic is great

6788541 agreed about discord who knows maby shes lactose intolerante and the amout of cheese in them makes her ill

6988957 Thanks!

And on your other comment, hmm...Twilight being lactose intolerant is a great theory! :twilightsmile:

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