Welcome to the world of Rarity's beloved cat, Opal.
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Vanilla Mocha
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How is this 2nd Person? It's all told in first.
6792565 Whoops... I'll fix that. Thanks for pointing that out. (I get first and second person confused.)
6792566
I, the author, the comment-writer, am the first person. You, the reader, are the second person. (Hope this helps!)
6792571 Thanks! It did help. ^-^
Nice writing.
6792817 Thank you very much! ^-^
Well, you made this robot heart choke up a bit, so mighty good show.
The whole "losing a pet" motif has definitely been done before, but your take on it from the pet's viewpoint is something I haven't seen before.
One thing that I will point out as a possible grammatical error is the changes in tense in the last few paragraphs, however, I could just be reading it wrong, and it is very minor.
Your cat is adorable, by the way.
She's a Persian, I take it? Also, all the fluff! She has more fur than my own!
Rush and Pony on!
T4E
6792822 Thank you! Glad you enjoyed! And I'll look over the last few paragraphs to see if I need to fix them. ^-^
6792849 Oh yes, an enjoyable feels-fest.
As I said, I'm not sure if it's a problem, I'm not as well versed in first person stories as I am in third person.
Rush and Pony on!
T4E
Word missing, methinks.
Such a beautiful story. I feel guilty for pointing this out.
6793593 Thanks for letting me know! I'll fix it once I can get onto another device (I can't edit on my phone).
This almost made me cry at the end
Good job
6794037 Thank you! ^^
Um, I think something's wrong with your cover art...
6814933 I made it months before I wrote the story, so ideas got changed. What is it?
6815527 cdn-img.fimfiction.net/story/lfvg-1446588138-296282-medium
You don't see anything out of the ordinary here? (Like, the entire right side?)
6816865 Oh, her boutique? O-o
Sorry...
No, no, how dare you?? Anything with pets dying just murders me.
6877193 Me too Xc luckily, it's AU ^^
You know, a lot of people don't give cats enough credit. They're often portrayed as villains, or selfish, or whatever, but they really are wonderful creatures. This was an unexpected side of Opal, and I'm glad I read it. ....I miss my cat....
The only thing that got to me, though, was Opal's past. Aren't Persians, like other purebreds, rarely feral? And would a kitten stay with her parents after they have another litter? Sorry, just nitpicking. Really a lovely story.
7210696 Totally agreed. I couldn't say it better myself.
Ehh...Possibly. Idk, I just needed something to work for the story.
I usually write shorts like these in less than an hour, so I don't spend much time on this stuff. But hey, I'm glad you enjoyed otherwise. 
sad, cute, probably not canon
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