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PresentPerfect


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After her battle with Starlight Glimmer, Twilight Sparkle has become interested in alternate universes. Having finally perfecting a spell that will allow her to traverse the boundaries of reality without damaging her own, she sets off to discover the wonders that await her in the multiverse.

Said wonders are considerably less wonderful than she expected.

Cover art by PinkamenaScratch!

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PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer

7351847
I think you have captured perfectly where the show will be in a few years.

If this dimension were to exist and come into ours somehow...lord, help us all....

PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer

7351852
No! That was the whole point of Like a G5! D:

My brain hurts.

You must now refer to me as:

Reginald Fantasy Epic Totally Rad Thomas Indestructible Llama Stephens XV

Don't ask about the llama...

How did you learn about my home dimension?!

I, Twinkle Celestia Ranma BoBoBo Peridot Ice Bear Nitz Gandhi Ambrose McCree Burgerpants IV, will have your head!

an entire universe where all ponies are alicorns and anime-like

so it's M. A. Larson-Verse: The Anime

This is the reason I love this fandom. Well, this and so many other stories like it.

Now if only we could get PresentPerfect to review it...

Saw the title of the story and thought it was familiar for some reason. Then I saw the chapter name and knew exactly what I was in for.

What a Super Trampoline-esque chapter title!

Well, this was ... a thing. I'm just gonna say I don't care for it, downvote it, and move on with my life, because I have nothing nice to say. Oh, wait, I guess the spelling and grammar were fine. So there's something nice. Yay.

Okay... That was weird. Weird doesn't always mean it's a bad thing though. God, I love a good anime parody.:rainbowlaugh:

PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer

7351888
There are two versions on derpibooru. That one was uploaded later, as far as I can tell.

7351957
I hope you're proud. V:

Drive the Hedgehog

This is what brought it all home

And how could there have been five ponies with that exact name?"

Ha.

Alucard

i.imgur.com/OItnWGv.png?fb

Doctor Who Malfoy

You had too much fun with this.

Kaiba

absoluteanime.com/yu-gi-oh/seto%5B4%5D.jpg

"Twilight, did you get into Pinkie's secret stash again?"

huehuehue obligatory drug reference

This was exceedingly dumb and pointless.
I approve, of course.

Twilight should really leave exploring probability space to the professionals. Still, a very amusing worldline, this.

7351925
We'd have to call in one of his alternate selves. I recommend Present Horizon Trampoline Estee Pascoite Archonix in Gardez and Explosions IX.

7352008

Raid boss Celestia

7351988
um.. , well, your version is 229173 https://derpibooru.org/229173
(3 years ago)
and the origin version is 32236 https://derpibooru.org/32236
(4 years ago)
it is obvious your image link is edited origin image by "who like alicorn drama" ..

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Because you cut off those "alicorn drama" words, so I think you want to know where the real origin image is.

And put the real image link on "Source link" , is a respect for artist.

That was horrible. And I liked it

7352031 It comes with the Princess-Slayer title, but most ponies don't toggle that on in their interface.

7352331

Thusly began Twilight Sparkle's ill-fated quest to earn the name Princess-Slayer Princess Twilight Sparkle Celestia Cream Pie. Present Perfect, I do hope you're taking notes.

PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer

7352008
Uh, obviously they're all alicorns, so they have to be called Celestia. It's in the rules!

Fun trivia: As I recall, 'Celestia' was originaly only in one of their names, I think Fluttershy's, as something of a dig at alicorn OCs who are the children of royalty. But while writing this, as I had lost my original notes some time ago, it just sort of naturally fell into place in all their names. I like it. :D

7352109
Huh, so it is. I'll change that, thanks. :)

She'll respawn tomorrow as Flutter Celestia Rukia Renamon Asami Dot Widowmaker vas Normandy VII and try to defeat me again.

...now I'm picturing a MLP/Paranoia crossover.

cf.geekdo-images.com/images/pic506681.jpg

As if I didn't have enough to do already.

Hang about. Is that chapter title from the Joshiraku OP, perchance? :derpyderp1:

The author conjoured this up by eating too much doritos for breakfast. Might as well give a like for the bloodbath scene...

PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer

7353739
No, Joshiraku got it from classic Japanese folkstories. :V

I'm just laughing my butt off with the super-long names. Now, if you'll excuse, me, I must create my own stupid-long name. Hey, how's this for starters? Dragon Celestia Annihilation Alphys Samwise Coulson Hasselhoff :trollestia: Coraline Kandaina Bulma . . .

With a name and title this, I expected the description to be "Rainbow Dash is still flying East."

But none could compete with Valentinez Alkalinella Xifax Sicidabohertz Gumbigobilla Blue Stradivari Talentrent Pierre Andry Charton-Haymoss Ivanovici Baldeus George Doitzel Kaiser III!

7354043
Well, yeah, but I was asking where you got it. :raritywink:

So, the only thing missing is Quill Mellowy and Professor Arch Trough.

...

...

Sliiiiiiiders. :trollestia:

PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer

7354191
This guy gets it.

7354229
This title is considerably more pronounceable. :B

7354520
Wikipedia :B

LOL I should've realised from the title alone that Twilight would end up in the MLP Mary Sue universe!:rainbowlaugh:

7358937 She's a lot tougher in the comics. Seriously, the show writers could learn a thing or two from the comic writers.

Actually, coming back to this... a tournament based around literally kicking ass and taking names sounds both hilarious and actually kinda compelling
I want to use this now. :rainbowlaugh:

Wow. I got lost so easily. I would never travel alternate timelines. Bad idea.

XD great story :rainbowlaugh:

The ending is basically this

PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer

8193958
Because the original version I linked in the author's note has apparently been taken down. :C

PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer

8198339
Copyright. :B

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