"They are NOT my friends! They are my classmates, my pupils, my peers. Better yet, my classhates! Nopony worthy of anything except education! Make the world a better place, will ya?!" These were the words spoken by a subconscious Moondancer.
Before she had a visit from the Princess of Friendship, another royal pony paid her a visit. Due to reoccurring nightmares and an inability to admit her fears and concerns, Moondancer has grown to be grumpy and introverted. Can Princess Luna point her in the direction she needs to be in?
Takes place before season 5.
Chapters (1)
Nice story, I like moondancer way too much though.
7328885 Thanks! :3
I believe you mean "lit"
I like it though, quality work.
Yeouch, poor Moondancer! I really like how you got into her mind here, and showed the inner workings of her character. If I had any advice, it's to have explain why she's angry at the others a little bit more, but that's about it. This servers as a perfect prequel to her episode, good job! ^^
7328893 Thanks! I'll fix that :3
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Thank you! :D
7328897 What, I don't get a thumbs up?
7328902 XD
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Well done.
7328956 Thank you ^^
Were you thinking of this scene when you wrote that line?
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7329017 Honestly? No XD
That's the end of the story?
I really enjoyed this. :)
7329167 Yep. Technically it's a prequel to "Amending Fences".
7329270 I'm glad ^^
7329590 Great! The only thing I noticed was that at some points I couldn't discern who was talking. But... that may because of the way I read! Anyway Great! But this doesn't seem like a whole story, can you do a second chapter where moon dancer spends the entire day thinking on what Luna said, and set it a day before "AMending Fences"?
7337734 Possibly. Though I don't want her to act reformed or else it wouldn't make sense with the episode it's based on. ;) But maybe.
Will read later.
The only thing I have to complain about (not really) is I couldn't tell who was talking at some points. Other then that, its a great story.
Hey i watched your video about you getting stalked and i just wanted to ask is everything OK?
7502334 I had no video about being stalked... Can you link me to the video you're talking about...?
Great story. Feels like a precursor to the episode