Hey! You, yes you! This story was made using all of these guys' OCs! So if you don't mind, go check them out. I'm sure they'll really appreciate it!
(Listed as their OCs) Tacitus, Garfield , Charming Thunder, Galaxy Nebula, Eclipse, Frosted Shard, Daffodil Spark, Shadow Wing, Paradise Oasis, Quillton Brooks, and Breeze! (Links broke. Will be added again soon.)
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Vanilla Mocha always hosts a Nightmare Night party, every single year. But every year, at least half her guests end up leaving because it's not as thrilling, spooky, or Nightmare-Night-ish as they hoped. This year, Mocha is determined to turn a few things around. So when she tells everypony that she is making her cafe extra scary, something unexpected happens, and it turns out to not be planned for the party at all...
That was awesome
6512704 Thank you! Hopefully chap 2 should be out in a week or so.
6512716 I can't wait!
6512719 Me neither!!!
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I like it!
I can't wait to see where it goes!
We're ignoring the fact that I'm actually in it...
6512833 Thanks!
Why?
6512840 You're welcome!
I don't want people to think I'm bias.
You sound like my Vet, I was born in a Italian restaurant, what do you expect I eat? And I'm not most cats and I do eat birds and fish and ferns; I just eat them without asking 'Jon'
I like to act like Garfield sometimes; just to know.
Great story!
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Hmm... that's true. Never thought about it that way before
6512855 Thanks! And XD you kinda do
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Although, it was still good writing.
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Thank you!
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My pleasure.
awesome first chapter! Thanks for including paradise!
6512955 Thank you! And it was no problem
Congrats for getting on the popular list!
6513056 Thank you!
That cover art is fantastic! And this was one heck of a first chapter. I can't wait to see more
Also, sorry I keep drinking all your coffee
6513489 Thanks! And lol
Only Quest would go as the Twelfth Doctor.
How does short hair sit on shoulders?
I like trains.
6514378 It's shoulder length.
XD sorry...I was using my iPad so it autocorrected it. I'll be sure to fix it.
6513814 True. But that can be a good thing.
Wow Mocha what a fantastic start to this story and I'm impressed with the OC's and how easy the flow of story is going. I am interested as to where you are going to go. This has been a rather strong start indeed!
Keep up the good work mocha and I really love the cover art (my beautiful Frost is alive...)
Anyway take care my friend!
-Frost
6515945 Aww, Thanks!
Awesome story so far!
6516992 Thank you!
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A banya
Huh. Someone actually noticed I've been saying 'dearie' lately, and wasn't insulted by it.
Thank you.
And Breeze says it too.
I've never actually met Breeze.
I'm loving this.
Good writing, cool premise, and I'm in it!
How could I not like it?
Keep on trekking, Mocha.
6534873 I had to have something to rhyme with lasagna lol
6535178 I'm not insulted (but I guess you knew that already).
Oh, and you're welcome! Also, thanks! I was kinda debating whether or not I should put in the song (I know, I've told you before) but I think I did good with it... I don't see any complaints. Anyways, thanks! And I'll start making everypony act more in character, like as we work on more OC development in chap 3 I'll start making Quillton more sarcastic (unless you wouldn't want me to).
6535237 I think making him more will work well.
6535740 Ok
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6535838 I don't dance.
But I DJ 
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idk I'm jacked on a large iced mocha I just chugged so... COFFEE!!!
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