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Vanilla Mocha


I enjoy ponies. I enjoy coffee. I enjoy writing. So therefore, this pegasister enjoys FimFiction.

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This story is a sequel to Rainbow Drab


How would the Simple Ways episode have happened if Rarity and Apple Jack had switched personalities?



Requested by and written for Phazon_Corrupted_Unicorn

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Comments ( 18 )

First I have to say, thanks! It's an honor to have a story written for me. Second, I couldn't help but laugh at the end! It was perfect! It was difficult to see the two of them with swapped personalities, but once they went into their Show personalities, I couldn't stop smiling! It was wonderful!

Now, if only you could rewrite the entire series like this, I'd be one of the first to fave and like it!

This is hilarious! I love how you give Applejewel the 'valley girl' accent. And Tractorhoof? :rainbowlaugh: Really funny story, I need to go back and read the prequel now!

Paradise Oaisis

5815182 No problem! I was actually considering doing one like this, but I didn't know if people would be interested enough to read it. Boy, I was wrong! :ajsmug:

I read a bit in, and to be honest all this seems to be is a story where their personalities are switched up, and names are slightly altered.

Sorry, but I was unable to enjoy this.

5815642 if you read the prequels (I don't know if you did or not) then it would make more sense. There is a total of two short stories like this one that come first, making this almost like a series.

The best way to enjoy the story is to read Apple Jewel's voice in Applejack's Mid-Atlantic accent and Rakity's voice in Rarity's Southern accent from S04 E13. :ajsmug: :raritywink:

Anyways, that was a nice story to read. I like the little cameo from Pinkie Pi and Rainbow Drab. :pinkiehappy: :rainbowdetermined2:

Okay, maybe I was skeptical at the start of the story. And the middle bit.

But the end. Was great.

Like the previous two in this series, the story needs more meat. But also like the previous two in this series, I enjoyed it. :) I think there's a lot that can be done with this concept.

6918799 This person Made a comic arc like that, actually ^^ I used to follow it, but then I got bored of comics altogether :P

We need a full on story of this universe.

7331300 I've considered it. ^^ I might write it... Idk. I've gotten a lot of negative feedback on the idea.

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I know ill enjoy it, I have already been thinking up ways it could start.

7331370 ^^ Alright. I may do that.

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