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Vanilla Mocha


I enjoy ponies. I enjoy coffee. I enjoy writing. So therefore, this pegasister enjoys FimFiction.

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Pinkie Pie is the element of laughter. The town comedian. The pony with all the friends, with no true enemies. She has never been hurt in any way, and she has all she wants and needs. Pinkie Pie has no real reason to feel sad.

So why does she?

(Written based off personal experiences. Would've wrote this is an OC fic, but Pinkie fit better.)

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Comments ( 23 )

:fluttershyouch: Right in the feels.

Like I said, really good story, Mocha! :twilightsmile:

7072326 Glad you enjoyed, then. :twilightsheepish:

This is too relatable for comfort... But great writing, anyway :twilightsmile:

I like this, you can't be happy all the time.

Why do many of us like to torture Pinkie with deep themes like this?

Very emotional story. Liked & faved. :twilightsmile:

7081357 Glad you liked it! ^^

7093040 You're not a bad friend! :pinkiesmile:

I have a question. would it be alright if I did a reading of this on my channel? I'm new to voice acting and i'm trying to get myself out there and well I really like this story it's really relatable to me. I promise I'll credit you and if you don't want me to that's fine I won't do it unless I have you're permission though cuz I don't want to do this unless I know for sure it's okay ^w^"

7098979 Oh my gosh, yes, I am honored! :pinkiehappy: Thank you very much!

7098984 You're quite welcome and thank you for letting me do it ^w^ i always like to ask first just in case but anyways it's gonna take some time to put together but i'll send you a link if you want when it's done

7098995 Alright! Thank you! And it's not a problem. :)

I liked it. With the sad tag I thought I was going to cry my eyes out like when reading Dearest Fluttershy or Forever Young but I didn't. Still good story and I are why you used the tags

7216228 Thanks ^^

I put the sad tag so she wouldn't be seen as OOC. It's not tragic...just Pinkie being sad and dramatic.

7216236 makes sense. As much as we all love Pinkie for being happy and making everypony smile, smile smile no one can be happy 24/7.

7216244 Couldn't have said it better myself. ^^

I've been in a situation like this. Upvote and favorite for you.

I understand where Pinkie is. She thinks it's not normal to be sad at times, especially with her disposition; but the world is a pretty heavy burden and life is a hard job with no breaks, so it's both normal and understandable to break down at times, even more so to doubt and question yourself. Sometimes, you have to just rely on yourself to pick yourself back up and keep going. Sometimes, that's all you need.

My major problem with this story is that it ends kind of abruptly. There's no real resolution to the problem; or maybe that's what you were intending, to show that it's another day, another battle? If I see it in this light, it becomes more understandable.

You get a fave and thumbs up. Good work for an unedited story.

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