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Wtf is an update lol


Ever since she was a filly, Pinkie Pie has been visited by a guardian angel. They're always together. She was Pinkie's first friend. But other ponies can't see her like Pinkie can.

Pinkie wishes they could see her.

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It won't be so cute once I'm done with it. :pinkiecrazy:

Awsome job but why you cahnge the cover it was cute.....


I'm not sure really. It didn't exactly portray the story at all. It was too happy. I don't know. I actually might change it back. :applejackunsure:

4030129 ugh, fine. WE ALL KNOW SHE'S A PSYCHO!! XD


Yeah, she kinda turned into more of a bitch than I thought she'd be. :twilightblush:

4074572 I know, Whats wrong with having an imaginary friend? there is no proof behind the diagnose, now if surprise was a leprechaun telling her to burn the world

then there is a bit more proof


She ran some tests. That was after the part where she was asking Pinkie Pie about Surprise. But since I'm not an expert by any means on how they diagnose mental illnesses, that part was cut out. :applejackunsure:

Whelp, all aboard the mindfuck train! WOO WOO!

Interesting, if not a bit frustrating. I will never understand how the sonic rainboom wasn't a more well known incident. Like, was Pinkie really the only pony in the area who saw the giant rainbow explosion? No one in Equestria wrote anything on it? Heck, I never understood how the colts who Rainbow Dash was with when she did it could deny it was real... Maybe it was fake? How else could such a thing be ignored.
Anyway, I hope Pinkie keeps seeing Surprise after taking the medication, but that's only because I want Surprise to be real. Then again, if she is real, she's doing a pretty bad job of being a guardian angel. Pinkie is currently suffering because Surprise keeps telling her to proclaim her existence to others, which she should have known would cause problems for her ward. A real GA probably would have told her not to tell others about her.
Hope you get to the Mane6 sometime soon, it will be interesting to see how they react to Pinkie's first friend. Maybe Twilight can prove her real with magic or something.

Damn it Hamster I want more.


Don't worry. Mane 6 shall come soon, Pinkie will be happy, and more darkness shall fall. :rainbowlaugh:

1. What?

"Just because you can't see me doesn't mean I'm there.



Oops. I'll fix that NOW!!! :facehoof:


Whoo, that almost ended in complete disaster. :twilightblush:

4175922 but really, this story is just fuck fucking fuck fuckedy fucking with my mind.


. . . . Is that a bad thing? :unsuresweetie:

4175941 Did I say it was?


*raises eyebrow* No. . *neck extends*

Okay then. :rainbowwild:

errr pinkie didnt break any laws whats with the cop?


She tried to get the ticket for less money: cop saw it.

. . . yeah, I. . . Hmm. . . :applejackunsure:

4176069 she haggled, its legal in pony society

Surprise story? Instafaved.

Oh, yes! We just our only employee yesterday.

There's something missing here...

Other than that, it's nice to see a new chapter come out! :pinkiehappy:


Whenever you think your chapter has no mistakes. . :flutterrage:

I probably would have never seen that. :yay:

I love it you must wright more!!!!:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:


.............Okay, I think. Maybe... Probably....


4753216 Its 5:50 A.m. No sleep...I read the entire 'End' credits in minecraft
And now I read this...
My head feels light......


4753229 Gurb a lurb Gurb a lurb Gurb a lurb Gurb a lurb:rainbowhuh:

Yet another great chapter to this story! Can't wait to see more! :pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile:

Holy hot damn! I used to ship Surprise and Pinkie Pie... (don't ask) so this was a huge blast form the past! I'm glad to see people even know who surprise is! Only if maybe sometime in the near future use Firefly in a different story... Now that's something I would read... A like and favorite from me, keep writing! :pinkiehappy:

This is turning out to be absolutely beautiful!!! But that one line... She wants to finally see her leave... Watch that be the last time she sees her :'0. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter! :D

*sniff Sniff*:pinkiesad2: that's so sad...so I give you props for pulling that of! It's not always easy trying to make a sad scene in a fic, but you pulled it off! I also think you did a great job on the first person.:twilightsmile::pinkiesmile:

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