Written for this contest by Harmonic Brush!
Rainbow Dash realizes that Soarin isn't only a Wonderbolt or a good friend, but he's also a part of her... a part that she lost. Will she ever get him back, and how?
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Vanilla Mocha
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Wow... This was cute
5819753 Alright!
Awww, that's sweet! It's started out really dark and sad, but then turned really sweet really fast! ^^ Keep up the good work!
5820349 Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
Yay, so cute.
WAIT!!! Tea break.
5820435 You and your tea...
5820437
Tea s good, tea is great.
Let hope we're not too late.
Everybody need some tea.
A fine thing that all people need
5820442 Nice
UGHHH! I have no ideas for the contest! I think I have one, but I dunno how to write it! Anyways, great story!
Awesome so cute
5821768 Thank you & good luck on your story!
5821969 Thanks!
I already sent in my entry.
Your story is awesome! I can't believe there's already hot competition!
5832838 I'm sure yours is really good!
Really needs an editor... There are a lot of errors I saw.
Great story, but I advice going over it a few times checking for incorrect tenses, and punctuation problems. They are everywhere.
5926284 Thanks- I'll go check it out.
Sorry about all of the mistakes.
5926284 It would also be nice if you could point out some of my mistakes- if you don't mind.
5926291 Most of them are tenses during the part after the letter is written.
5927992 Ok, thank you! I'll be sure to fix them.
5928619 you are welcome.
Nice Story Love it! :3
Aww, the feels!
5930780 Thanks!
The story was rather cute but I would appreciate it if longer. The conflict was resolved in a matter sentences, when it should have been a little more difficult to solve and with Dash mostly. She wouldn't show Soarin that she was hurting, instead she would angrily push him away. It would have been 20% cooler if it was longer, just saying. As mentioned before, this is a cute idea that has worked many times in different fanfics all used in their different ways. Also I liked how you made the ending a reference to the beginning
Awww~
6918887 XD
So cute ♥
7081050 Glad you enjoyed. :)
This was so cute!
I love it!