Twilight stalks and harasses a nine year old filly...but it's in the past, so it's totally legal.
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Summer Dancer
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Wha.... What the heck did I just read
6751588 my thoughts
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Rekt.
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Well that was certainly a thing...that happened. Gah what am I doing with my life!? Just take my upvote.
This was a trollfic?
You named your fic after it, but you didn't put the joke in. I don't know how to feel about that.
*spell
Also
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That was really cute at the end ha ha
Fuck, the 1-7 flyway burn was...well burny. Like, you should consider yourself Trogdor with how much burnination was in this fic.
Also, I really feel sorry for Dash at the end
Our.
This was the best trollfic I have read, seeing as it is the only one.
Writing something normal? Bah, normal is boring. Strange and different is where all the fun comes from
6753661 Nah, It was hilarious
That was hilarious. "Stranger danger," I'm dying here.
And it showed. Like...really. What the hay did I just read?
6751835 Damn it! haha I was just about to post that.
It was funny but I don't understand the "sex" tag
6761004 I guess it was for reference purposes only. Wouldn't get approved without it
6761027 Did you try to get it approved without it, and they insisted because of a little innuendo?
6762170 It was in submission for a day, and out of curiosity, I added the tag and was approved immediately...at least that's what I'm assuming.
6762193 Sounds like a coincidence. If you ask a mod about it, they'll probably okay removing it. But if not, then they probably just need a "Suggestive Themes" tag or something, although I remember one of them saying the Teen rating sort of covers that already. :shrug:
Btw, I thought the story was alright. Worth a laugh or two. The only thing that bugged me was that it didn't follow Rainbow Dash all the way through. Like, it diverged into what felt like a separate story in the middle. I don't know if that's a legitimate gripe though, just my opinion.
I overall like it anyway, so cheers. 
6762229 Thanks
I liked this bit.
Pretty funny this. Great job.
11/10
Would hue again.
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Nice reference to War by Edwin Starr! :D /)
hahaha now we just need a sequal where rainbow tries to get celestia onto twilight and arrested for doing that which she wont do cause it saved the timeline
That song alone is worth ten thousand likes plus the corresponding face palms.
Haha isnt she eleven?
Don't you mean "decked you in the schnoz?"
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Do you want this story to get an M rating?!
Yay. Rainbow's scarred for life.
I really thought you were going to write "that" type of story.
That was so freakin awesome!
I'm more impressed that Rainbow actually managed to keep all that straight.
Good God, y'all.
Well, I lol'd :D
Poor twilight
You get a like just for that ridiculous (in a good way) song reference. The rainboom aspect is resolved nicely, too. I don't really like the final scene, but the rest is good enough for an upvote.
You can has review...
I feel like this story has squeal potential. Rainbow keeps avoiding Twilight because she's scared of her and thinks she's a pedophile. She keeps the CMC and the other kids away from her and Twilight has to fix her mess and try to make Rainbow her friend again.
Ooooh, that sure makes things retroactively awkward.